I'm confused. Why was there a sudden drop in overall grammar quality as soon as Isane started talking? I think this could've been a fun fic, but with rudimentary grammar errors all over it just isn't worth the read.

ive gotta say wish u keep going in this novel its well thought out and written im actually astonished

Great read so far

‘Won’t tell you who the pairing is until later’ quite clearly has soi Feng aa a character list I wonder if it’s obviously her :p

I don't know if you will ever check this account, and as for anyone else, check the Author bio, he made a new account.

Now, as I was saying, there was a couple of ideas, like having his zanpakuto with the ability of Superior Adaptation, and with it, Naruto can become dangerous, like for example:
1. having spiritual Foxes inhabited each Needles, thus making them autonomous.
2. the Needles acts as eyes, ears, etc.
3. If they don't have enough needles to cover a wide area, then they will multiply themselves to cover said area.
4. They can become invisible.
5. They can expand & shrink, in order to deal with any size opponent.
6. The Needles can cover themselves with lethal to nonlethal poisons, which change after each use.
7. The Needles when encountering faster opponents, will make the Needles faster in time, if the opponents are more durable, the Needles become much sharper & etc.
8. When the Needles are in something, they will drain it, and return to empower & heal Naruto, which is permanent.

Basically the Needles can Adapt & Evolve in order to help Naruto, (on top of what they can do already.), but they aren't the only thing that can Adapt & Evolve, Naruto will also be affected with the Superior Adaptation effects.

Also, Naruto will have "Yondu Arrow", which is manually controlled by him, since it's not possessed by a spiritual fox.

Great story! When will we be seeing a new chapter coming out?

please update

Type your review of the narutoxoverbleach this the naruto who is the useless and weakest hahah erase this fic

I enjoyed every single of of your stories...
Thank you for everything ik you may not be reading this but I still want to say thank you
I'm glad you made become an author again thank you

And this is where I quit.

Thanks for all you've written till now.

Shikamaru has to be VC

I can honestly see Sui-Feng and Naruto becoming a thing. If only because Sui-Feng will rock the tsundere role once she personally gets to know him on a one-on-one basis.

So hope you come back to thus one day!

So I just recently discovered this while browsing around and I got to say, I like what I'm seeing here. Naruto owning one hell of a unique Zanpakuto that reminds me of Barbatos Lupus Rex from Iron Blooded Orphans. Unfortunately you haven't been updating this story and I'm pretty sure you can't read this, but it's the thought that counts.

You write some damn good scenarios and I mean no offense when I say this but by the fucking gods your comment ment to your projects is just atrocious at times and I have almost every single one of your fanfictions and not one have you ever written a conclusion to which I can understand to a point it's difficult to give yourself the mental fortitude to be able to actually sit down and complete a story but please I beg of you most all your stories have a really good beginning please give them a fitting conclusion too and If you ever read or acknowledge my review thank you sincerely

Please come back and finish this, it was just getting good.