Man, I think I'm actually scared for Fleur. To think what they have planned for her...I really hope there's a way she could escape from this, but somehow, I don't think there will be. The only real help she gets is from Snape.

Who's likely just saved her from gang rape, however with Rabastan still there, I feel it's still likely she'll be violated.

A very solid little piece that really leaves things open for more to come if you were ever interested, but still complete enough it doesn't leave a reader wanting too much more.

Well, they behave exactly as I would have expected from them, toying around with a prisoner like that. And when she's quarter Veela... And it's so very /thoughtful/ of Rabastan to stay behind when the others left.
I commend you for writing something with a 'prompt' like that (though I had expected from the rating there'd be more than just threats, but maybe that's just me).

So dark and lovely, just what the evil snake monster lady (*coughlamiacough*) ordered! XD

Fleur, tsk tsk, arguing about percentages isn't going to make them think any better of your mixed blood heritage! Although that bit was rather amusing, and illustrated well that she still has some fight left in her.

*sigh* Snape just HAD to come in and ruin all their fun, didn't he?

I don't know what word you meant there, but "cervix" is not a part of the neck... and I don't think you meant for the necklace to fall out of the place where that would actually be...

I can guess what he wants to replace her necklace with: a nice slave collar.