Un buen tiro.

A wonderfully well written piece where the character has been portrayed quite accurately as according to the novel. Personally, I admired the way you described the mundane and drifting thoughts of Yukinoshita as she laid on her furniture, sick and alone. One could feel the lethargy experienced by the MC through the first person dialogue.

I have read your other works before and they have brought me a new perspective of the way Yukinoshita may have thought in the novels. Thanks to you, I have been noticing more of Yukinoshita's awareness and what might have been her thoughts in the novel. This has led me to re-read the entire oregairu volumes presently available and fostered within me the habit of re-reading any new chapters that Kyakka is releasing. So far, I have nothing but a positive review when I read your works. It has been an immense joy for me, so thank you.

I would like to clarify one thing however, the car that fetched the Yukinoshita sisters was driven by a Chauffeur was it not? Yet you mentioned '...Haruno slammed on the brakes...' A possible oversight? Correct me if I have been mistaken and well done.