This story was utterly delightful and sweet! I like Alexandria–she was believable as a character and she fit well into the storyline. Thank you for sharing this story, and God bless!

This was a great story.

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Ooh i like, can't wait to read more, i just got back from seeing the new NATM and now that I'm older, i find akham very attractive, when i watched it i was like: oh god, what happened? He wasn't this hot before? But other than that i like how you've got this panned out. ,

Great ending! This story was very beautiful, great job!

Kahmunrah's expression over the cake would have been priceless. Also, I loved Octavius' comment about weddings. :)

Ahkmenrah becoming human is possibly one of the best things that could happen in Night at the Museum. He can finally be with Alexandria. Loved the interaction between Alexandria's father and Ahkmenrah.

Ahkmenrah asking about soda was just too cute. I can so see him doing that. :) Another great chapter as always.

Your OC character is better at guarding the museum's exhibits than Larry, and she's much faster at getting the job done. Props to her. :)

Wow. Just, wow. The interaction between Alexandria and Akhmenrah is really good, which is something you don't see in OC chracters very often. I love this story so much!

Another great chapter! Your style of writing is fantastic! I love how Jed and Octavius used themselves as game pieces. :) That was a pretty funny idea.

Great first chapter, it aroused my interest at an early point. Can't wait to read the next seven chapters. :)

A pretty interesting first chapter. Onto the next one :)