This story is hilarious and well written. The only real complaint I have is that it started to get pretty rushed at the end.

The 4 part series that this is a part of has definitely earned a spot on my favorites list.

Just wanted to say i greatly enjoyed this story and laughed my ass of on numerous occasions. And though it my not be the best written (top 15 atleast) piece of fanfiction i've found its most definetly the most hilarious. Kudos to you and may the stars guide you,
(Now im of to read some more of your art)

Do higschool DXD next it got so much potential !

You should really watch Highschool DxD.

The amount of bullshit you could play with us amazing.

It would be amazing.

I read Wex as Wrex and now can't stop picturing Ronan being Ronan Wrex the Krogan.

Wait, does that mean your plans to commit suicide by the time you're 40 were running behind schedule, or that you now want to do it by the time you're 30?

Ok great story's so far but whats next? Marvel? Star Wars? Mass Effect?
What is the next step in the series?

this entire series has been one of the best i can think of. i have read and reread this set of books loving every moment of it. i hope that one day i get to see a sequel.

Try to continue if you get any ideas. it was awesome

Colour me impressed. You really did an awesome job with this. And whether you choose to write something different or a sequel to the universe you created, I'll be looking forward to reading it.

Great job, and thank you for sharing this with us.

Lahmikhara

These 4 fics have brought me extreme entertainment and I haven't been able to stop reading them until now. The humor and the story has just been amazing!

I do wonder though what happened to Karasuba? It's only mentioned that she has been in stasis for centuries at the point where Naruto, Xanna and Akitsu left this dimension, I hope they took her with them.

Thank you for these excellent stories and I sincerely hope that you will find inspiration to write another sequel.

Cheers!

That was AWESOME! I loved the whole story. the way of the SUPER PERVERT bring about universal peace. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

That was fucking AWESOME I hope you put up another sequel soon

Ahhh i really hope for another seuqel for this

I started reading this Naruto series even though I didn't know much about the anime just because I had found the Harry Potter fics fascinating.

I've got to say that I think this one was the most fun of the four so far. The original Naruto story was probably the most dramatic, but I find the idea of the lead characters screwing around as gods to be much more amusing & fun to read.

Plus, I love Akitsu, she is such a nice counter to the loud & overwhelming gods.

Even though I'm really enjoying A Discordant Note, I do hope you someday come back to write part 5 of this series- can't want to see where Naruto & Xanna go next.