I don't like when people cheat but you made it so real and understandable. Actually i kinda confused why padme love anakin, will be more realistic if she loves obi wan (see from her nature that shows she is so mature, smart and regal)
But even the senator choose bad boy *sigh*, come on george lucas, typically huh...

excellent

Beautifully written. I simply love the way you described the relationship, and I was impressed at your use of the word superfecundation. Bravo! Bravo!

so in this story padme cheats on Anakin this makes Anakin have a point on mustafar