That was nice.

I blame time travel.

So I'm reading this, trying to figure out what happened, when suddenly I wondered if that was the point of this story: for people to draw their own conclusions. Am I right? If not, please tell me what's going on, because I'm confused.

Good story, I enjoyed it.

The juice reference was particularly amusing.

I'm as confused as Misato as to what happened, but somehow that seems like the whole point of the exercise.

Kudos for a fine one-shot.

i need a prequel or sequel or i will go insane wondering what just happened.

I am as confused as Misato...bravo!

Now, um...why? *Please?*

you should keep going with this story, I like it a lot.

I guess Shinji was comforting Shinji...

Great job though.

really nice wee fic here. and i couldnt tell it wasnt pre-read at all...you write a lot better than alot of authors who have several pre-readers.

I really really like that image... Asuka comfy on Shinji's lap, like they've been together for such a long time they're so used to it. Old lovers...

Man, you should continue with this if you feel like it! It would be interesting...just to understand what happened. I know I keep saying this, but you're one of the best writers on this site in my opinion. I know you have all kinds of people willing to pre-read...but I'm always available to pre-read or give ideas. you can e-mail me at or IM me on AIM at FoxGray02

Thanks!

Amusing as hell. Nice job!

Heh, funny!

What does it all mean!

what was happening? other than that very descriptive pineapple juice instead of just juice description! this was a good story tho i really wanna know whats going on! peace out.