Like all your stories, this story is amazing. It's so deep, it made me cry, and it's really hard to make me cry when I'm reading. Keep writing, it's awesome!

TMNTLover

YAY! Can't wait for Aftershock!

Wow, this was really good... never thought Splinter would cry. Great story!

Loved this, and am also looking very much forward to Aftershock!

This is so depressing. Like your fanon about the bank account, choosing New York, and the distrust of technology and preference for tradition. Also liked Yoshi deciding to live because of Shen. Really believable backstory. I appreciate tight plotting like this. Thorough accounting of everything. Good characterization, too.

Lovely. I like the bit using Leo's perspective. It reminds me of the ending to your "Insights" story from way back. What a beautiful, tragic piece. I love the way that you write your Splinter-centered fanfics; you bring something to them that I'm still too young to have words for.

-Lizzy :)

Wow. Nice fight scene. Good build-up, too. Like the plotting and characterization. The way the fire started, the men surrounding the house, the killing of Yoshi's parents...Brilliant. I like Yoshi's conflict between his brother and who the Shredder is now. Good start.

Wow. Merry Christmas indeed! You're really cranking out the fanfictions lately! This is beautifully written. Wrenching, but beautiful. I'd better get back to my family now, but have a wonderful Christmas, everyone!

-Lizzy :)