This is written so well. The imagery and detail is very vivid and you pace nicely. The only issue was when it switched over to Caroline's point-of-view. The transition took me a bit to realize and adjust to, but great read so far!.

This is very week written. I love the Caroline and Bonnie dynamic, hope you carry on with this story!

Ty for updating
Can't wait until damon makes his appearance

Now this is a vampire story. I wish this how the show started.

Tyler's a douche and Stefan is heaven sent for bringing him down a peg! I'm guessing and I'm sure Stefan is too that Tyler is on vervain. I don't think Tyler knows about the supernatural but his parents as well as the Sheriff and Bonnie's folks are pretty aware. I'm hoping Stefan won't be too freaky and talk to Bonnie but I also want him to be honest with both she and Caroline and when will Damon make his presence known and not just in Bonnie's drawings and dreams?

The true allure of a dangerous vampire. I loved this it was great. I am completely in love with this. Seeing Damon hunt through Bonnie's eyes was exhilarating. She has every right to hate him and be attracted to him especially feeling his lust. See you next update.

Heeey I got a shout out :) ty kindly
I love your stories and I like where you're going with this one
Now I wonder if Damon will be bad or good hmm :) update soon

This is going to be an interesting story. Can I say that I'm happy and relieved that Elena is not up all through this story! Season 1 and maybe Season 2 Elena were okay but now she's unrecognizable. I've always loved Caroline's and Bonnie's dynamic; they seem like they are truly the best of friends and are like sisters BUT lately everyone including Care Bear have basically put Bonnie and her well-being to the wayside. They've been selfish and only care about themselves and Bonnie has never been portrayed as selfish; she's selfless which, in my opinion, is a HUGE problem. I guess Bonnie wouldn't have so much of a huge fan following if she wasn't. So, yes, I'm gonna enjoy reading this story because my Salvatore brothers will be focused on my two favorite best friends plus it seems that Bonnie and Damon share a past and Stefan knows it. I can't wait until she sees that her handsome stranger in her drawings are in deed real. I'm also looking forwards to Stefan and Caroline.

So I'm really reading this for the Steroline and Caroline/Bonnie friendship, I'm wondering what's going to happen, especially with the doppelganger stuff without Elena. She's also being mentioned a few times so I wonder if she'll make an appearance and how things would go. I also like that Caroline is a science whiz, something different.

Wow this something fresh and new, I can't wait to read more! Good luck!

I really like where this is headed. *sigh* What I wouldn't give for dreams of Damon, and that last drawing! Caroline is adorable with her crush! One thing I think I should point out is that Stefan/Paul has green eyes. Anyway, I look forward to more!

Interesting start!

Great first chapter! I'm interested in seeing how this plays out in contrast to canon. I like the differences so far, especially Baroline's friendship! :)

Is it bad if I want this to be a Bonnie/ Salvatores triangle with Bamon as endgame? Lol

Omfg so good update soon!