pls update

Wow I'm in love with this story

Awww, I didn't know that this would be the last chapter! Now I'm sad.

i love this story! please keep writing, it's so good!

Plzzzz update!

Very interesting story! I hope you continue at some point! I will eagerly await the next chapter!

I don't usually read Oc's-who-love-Death-Note and-just-happen-to-travel-to-its-dimension, but you've given M a bit of mystery and spunk. Nice job. I think you've got most of the characters down pat, including their reactions, although I do think Near is usually a bit more reserved.

Please continue rewriting i read the other one and was sad as hell at the fact that i didnr find out what happened aftr the hotel thing so i spotted This one and i really want to read the next chapter even thou i already know whats gonna happen i atill wanna read it lolz please please

Axel seems like a fun, cute character. I really liked that part with the art. One of my middle school art club teachers told me draw what you see, not wht you know. This chapter reminded me of that.

Also Near is adorable. I like how M is spreading love and warmth everywhere. The fluff makes my heart warm. Thanks a lot for taking the time to update the chapter. Especially since your busy!

Love it! :-)

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek so cute!

Awww, Axel is so sweet! And Shayna is adorable. :) I loved that chapter.

It wouldn't let me post another review for chapter 7, so I'll post it here!
Ah it's up! I'm so happy to see you got everything in order to upload it. This was one of my favourite chapters and still is, my all time favourite was the one where they play outside. I'm glad you found time to upload and hopefully you didn't spend all your free time on this and enjoyed yourself. I love seeing M and Near's interactions, it's very cute and Near needs hugs. Anyway I loved the chapter and enjoyed Axel's "WHAT" and "HELL YEAH" he's such a great character and never fails to make me laugh. I hope your schedule clears up a bit and you get some time to yourself to enjoy. Until next chapter!
DevilsTune (Stephanie)

I love you. I love M. I love this story. I remember when I first came onto fan-fiction years ago and checked out Death Note, Rewriting Your Story was the first thing I clicked on. Your writing truly captures the suspenseful feel of Death Note. And it was touching. By the time I joined fanfiction, I had lost your story. But I've found it again and fallen back in love. M is a better character as a whole now. I am really happy that you didn't give up on the story and that you are improving your writing. Stay awesome.

I just figured out that this story is being rewritten and now I'm gonna make a cheesy joke. This version should be called "Rewriting Rewriting Your Story".