I love the premise of this story...reincarnation-like, right? Don't know anything about Inception, but I'm loving learning about it and of course seeing the glimpses of Gale and Madge. I can't wait to find out more about what's going on.

I think you did a beautiful job with the first chapter...there's just enough information and intrigue to hook in your audience.

I can't wait to see what happens next...can't wait to see who this woman is. Please update soon.

Also, I'm so sorry that I've just seen this. Thank you for dedicating this to me...you have no idea what it means to me.

I really like this. I love how you wrote it, I know that it drew me in. It's very interesting how you have it set up with Dom as her Father and Arthur as her bodyguard, but I really like it. I think it's very interesting. I really liked how the dreams are brought up but that she's been seeing the dreams since she was young.

I love seeing the relationships like Arthur/Ariadne, Eames/Valeria (that surprised and pleased me) and Arthur and Eames friendship. I really loved the part in the car between Arthur, Eames and Ariadne.

The dream world...or if it's that...with Gale and Madge is very interesting. I like how Gale is there for Madge and is trying to protect her. The war that's going on is interesting and I'm wondering about all the events over there and if the necklace has some sort of a significance.

Anyways, I really like how things are going and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Sorry if this is a bit late.

Hunger Games Inception is my new OTP. Happy birthday in advance! :")

Whaaaaaaaaat omfg noooo. You're such a great writer! I swear to God, you're one of my favorite writers! You're just perfect! Don't let this thoughts get to you, you are amazing and such a talented writer! :) I'm being serious, I'll be devastated if you stop writing. You're so good at it, it's not fair... Omg I can't believe it. No, please don't stop writing... If you have problem with time, or you're feeling unispired, I can understand. You probably need some time to relax and to fill your head with new ideas. But if you stopped because you think you're not a good writer, then you're wrong and you shouldn't stop! I don't know why you think you aren't good at writing, I don't know what the signs are, but I'm pretty sure it's in your head. I mean, maybe you have your doubts about your writing and you see things worse than they actually are. Stop focusing on the negative things and start looking at the positive. I'm a fan of your stories and your writing, and I'm sure I'm not the only one. This is a good sign, right? I don't want to be pushy or something, I'm just really upset because you're a very good writer and it would be a shame to leave all of it behind. Please reconsider your choice to quit... But even if you won't come back, you should know that I'll always be a fan of yours... :D

Lots of love,
Kelly

Ahh omg this is amazing! Such a promising chapter, I want to read more so bad! The first chapter was great! And I'm sure it's just the beginning... You're such a great writer, I'm in love with your writing and your stories. And omfg your ideas are just killing me. I loved literall about this story so far!

Lots of love,
Kelly

This story looks like its going to be very interesting. I like it.

Thank you for the first chapter, go)))

This beginning is full of mysteries. I wonder what her dreams are really about and that woman at the end, how does she know her name? I am really curious about that :) Also I love that Arthur calls her Princess, it is so sweet and adorable and the funniest thing was how Ariadne thought that Arthur and Eames were gays, so hilarious :D Hm, Valeria is here again, it is good surprise for me :) I am definitely looking forward for more chapters, I think that this is going to be great story. Happy holidays and I pray for you to have some gifts under the tree :D