cool please continue

Even with the chapter name you might want to warn people before the start of a lemon and put some bold letters after to signify the end. Even if it was a little obvious lol. Still some people might miss the chapter name and not want to read the lemon.

I like where this is going

Ok so you kinda went off the deep end here.
I can forgive demon being spelled daemon.
But vampirism? There better be a good explanation. Because we haven't gotten to know why he has rinnegan either or can do an S rank jutsu as a genin.

You are very annoying

a little simplistic but ok

All KINDS of things WRONG with this fight, #1. Sayuri ALONE should be able to ROAST the snake. Itachi beat his ass with the and sayuri has the SAME thing. #2. The rinnegan should have been able to see not only that, that was a fake orochi but also WHERE the REALLY REAL one was and should be able to track him. #3. The curse mark is made from juugo's BLOOD (it's the only reason it works) as a vampire, naruto has CONTROL over blood, so should be able to change/remove those AT WILL. #4. The rinnegan ALONE can rip that snake to SHREDS easily! #5. Gaia should be able to kill the snake sannin ALONE, let alone not really be hurt by him... So this SHOULD be SUCH A ONE-SIDED fight it's kinda PATHETIC. This STUPID idea was done just to make it like canon and it TOTALLY DOESN'T FIT THIS STORY!

So as said before, why didn't naruto KNOW it was a fake? He can SMELL blood for miles, hear heartbeats AND SEE CHAKRA! Clones are KINDA WORTHLESS AGAINST HIM (or did you forget that?) ANYTHING orochi could POSSIBLY DO, NARUTO CAN SEE! (eyes of GOD! remember?) Orochi is a MINOR threat now, It's KINDA WHY he doesn't have them in canon!

A better come back line for naruto: "okay, so which one of you all kicked me?" We have 17 MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS... I think I'm done.

THAT IS PRECISELY why I say the exams, are a NO-NO, and tournaments? OUT OF THE QUESTION.. NEVER GONNA HAPPEN, STUPID IDEA..Leaders WILL GO TO WAR, Sacrifice THOUSANDS, HUNDREDS OF THOUSANDS of lives if they think they can get a hold of "eternal life". Which is why naruto should NEVER participate in ANY of these things and he DEFINITELY should NOT be doing "Q and A" with anyone.

Yeah, he has the rinnegan, and the crystal release, BOTH basically put him in harem territory... Add in damphir children? And you've got a harem that rivals SULTANS! (immortality?... There isn't a single leader that DOESN'T want that.. Even IRL)

You know, naruto's gonna HAVE to get over his whole "HANG UP" with girls loving him, not only are there a LOT of them, but he's a VAMPIRE, over the centuries he's gonna watch A LOT of them, grow-up, get old and DIE... THEN RINSE AND REPEAT ad-nausium! It's JUST how things ARE! I know a HUMAN naruto is what people connect with easier but, if he's a vamp, he's gotta kinda SQUASH that mentality or he'll go COMPLETELY nuts/evil in under a century. Vamps HUNT, THEY FEED, they watch entire CIVILIZATIONS rise and then CRUMBLE... This "high-school drama" has no place in their brains. That's the HUMAN begging to be heard. You don't have to be a totally EVIL S.O.B. to last centuries, and you don't have to be some WHINING idiot wanting "to see a sunrise"... Just like with humans, there are a FEW actual "EVIL" people and there are some that should be saints... But for the most part... DREDGE ON... This high-school stuff is boring. (of course this whole ARC is kinda boring)... He's the biggest BAD-ASS in the land, plus he has the rinnegan, you don't think a few laws are gonna be BENT(broken) to get more of that? I hate the naive naruto.. He needs to "WAKE UP".

With naruto's vampire senses shouldn't it BE REALLY EASY to "spot the snake" way before he becomes a threat, I mean even the CLONES wouldn't work, vampires can HEAR heartbeats from A LONG WAY away, smell blood for MILES! SO basically there is NO way the snake could surprise them OR use his clones to trick them, HE'D KNOW! (not to mention the rinnegan could PHYSICALLY SEE if it was a clone and where the real one was). (again, canon doesn't APPLY if you PUMP UP the hero, the only reason orochi was a threat before was because naruto was STUPIDLY WEAK! ANY NIN is gonna seem like an unbeatable boogieman too that!) Against someone POWERFUL? Orochi is AT BEST an "annoyance". Think about it.. All he picks on are the very YOUNG and inexperienced or the elderly.. He KNOWS he's not a threat to any regular nins (not without risking his life, which is something he isn't willing to do) Which again begs the question, WHY IS HE EVEN HERE?! He knows naruto can kick his ass seven ways to sunday, and sayri has the M. Sharringan which he KNOWS he can't win against.. So really this is POINTLESS. He's NOT going to take over naruto, that mark shouldn't work with just KYUUBI, add in vampireism and it's LAUGHABLE to even be considered, it's WORTHLESS, all of his tricks are WORTHLESS. and Naruto can KILL HIM (not the body...HIM... With ONE TOUCH... and because of pein, orchi KNOWS THIS! He shouldn't be within 50 MILES of naruto).These exams are a WASTE OF TIME.

Again, shouldn't orochi just want to STAY AWAY from naruto (he already knows by PAINFUL experience HE CAN'T TAKE ON the rinnegan, let alone rinnegan backed by the kyuubi, in a vampire!... Heck, he knows he can't even take on the M. Sharringan, so what's he even DOING HERE?! Other then just trying to make it like canon, for some bizarre reason!) He's OUTGUNNED! AND FOR ONCE?.. He KNOWS for A FACT he's outgunned! These kids could RIP HIM APART and actually END him! (I'd think he'd wanna be on the other-side of the planet!)

I'm not really sure why kiba is still so antagonistic with naruto (given that naruto kicked his BUTT first chapter, BAD and now has TWO swords strapped too his back) but I chalk that up to "dogs and bats don't get along". And that you've made kiba into just a complete ASS-HAT in this one. Not too tough, his mouth moves at 100 km/h but his BRAIN moves at about 2.

Good thing you took anko out, I always wondered why she didn't "spot the snake" almost INSTANTLY in canon... I mean she spent MOST of her childhood learning DAILY from him and has OBSESSED on him ever since... SO... YEAH, never made much sense that she couldn't EASILY pick up on him. Especially since the IDIOT did the TONGUE move that NOBODY ELSE in the elemental nations uses! It was like he was DARING her to blow the whistle and CRUSH his plans! Never understood that because he's NOT smart enough to have a plan "B". He's not PATIENT enough to just call it off and start again a few years later, and he's not CLEVER enough to alter his plans. (you can kinda TELL all that from his appearances and how easily he DIED at sasuke's hands).

"I won't have anyone revealing my or my friend's secrets"...? REALLY? THAT'S WHAT YOU WANT HIM TO SAY NOW!? Wasn't he JUST playing "20 questions" with temari and kankuro and orochi? (assuming the kazekage is dead already)... Is this one of those cases of "nobody talks BUT ME!"? Cuz he already spilled ENOUGH beans about him self to "fill-out" the bingo book!

Oh one thing, If naruto has the rinnegan then shouldn't orochimaru be ABSOLUTELY terrified of him? I mean the human path is one of the FEW abilities that could KILL the snake-face in ONE TOUCH. He should be avoiding naruto like the BLACK PLAGUE.

Naruto REALLY needs to stop going on these STUPID "show dog" missions and start getting serious with training up his abilites, I mean he's got what? 6 pools to draw from now...Vampire, kyuubi, the rinnegan, the crystal release, chkara chains, black thorn... PLUS sealing, he's really gotta GET TO WORK (stop caring about SHOWING OFF!) (which is essentially what ALL tournaments are). It all sounds SO STUPID... Even if it is staged, the oto nin CROWING about becoming chunin, you realize all these people are willing to throw their lives away for what is essentially, a TEACHER'S AID position! It's just so DUMB! It's like declaring "I WILL be a janitor!"... Or "I WILL be the next fry cook!"...SEE? Hasn't naruto and his group got more IMPORTANT things to do? (train, wash their hair, cut their toe-nails, go get a root canal...ANYTHING?)