Pretty good

I enjoyed reading this one as well. This was even scarier than the first one and the whole resolution was surprising and unexpected.

I love this story just as much as I did the first one! I hope I'll love the next one just as much.

My sister is annoying so I didn't get to read the chapter compleatly but it's a great story.

TK: I'm sorry I can't read on... But why would you get rid of FNF 1 just to put in FNAF 2!? That's insane! The FNAF Trilages are AWESOME!
But with Mike freeking out like that I just can't even! I'm sorry I read the first but your mostly going to get me trying to correct everything like I said I have Game OCD. But you keep up the good job.

That was a sweet ending! I really like how you wrote the character's different reactions to one another in this story, and how you built up Jeremy as a red herring! Of course, now we know the real cause of the Bite of '87, but this was still a really interesting read!

Just as good as the the last on defo reading the next one!

Wait, theres a PUPPET in the game!? Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, so THAT'S whats inside that stupid box. 100% truth, I did not even know that there was a puppet in the game, I always keep the music box wound up before it runs out.

Isn't it WEIRD that Toy Bonnie and Toy Freddy look like women and Toy Chica looks like a bitch who had work done. And, there are only 10 Animatronics, not counting Shadow Freddy and Shadow Bonnie. What do you mean Eleven?

Y'know, for some reason, I picture Mike being voiced by Markiplier. Just a thought. XD

I am in awe at how well this story is, I am doing an FNaF story myself, but it's a lot different from this story here. EXCELLENT is the word used to describe this story. The way you imply the lore in an interesting way, the suspense, the horror, the grittiness, it keeps me at the edge of my seat, just simply amazing. Now I'm sure people have probably asked this, but now that the fourth game is coming out soon, will we see the gang with Mike and Jeremy maybe, enter Five Nights at Freddy's 4, with the now, even more terrifying nightmare animatronics?

Hi! This is a great sequel which I finished reading at this very second, and I was wondering, could you do another in fnaf 3? Just wondering. Also, if you did, maybe could you implement Phoenix wright as a character? Thanks!

Wtf?! MIKEIs the killere?! I honestly never thought Id feel sypmathetic for the guy who killed those kids but knowing he and Mike are one. Hes just da best.

I'd say you did as good a job interpreting the little hints left throughout the game as Game Theory did, Kudos.

In the previous chapter when the "purple guy dies' or u call it the murderer.U should of saying that ...

The Animatronics grabbed on to the purple guys arms,leaving him to drag on the they went to the secret room where a suit with spring-locks in it (springtrap)is lying on the animaronics put the purple guy in it until he began to suffer with all those spring-locks crushing the 4 videogamers saw the horrible if u are making W.I.R vs fnaf 3.U can put like a horrer prev,Hope u like it :).peace