I read the full story on Kindle Unlimited and thought it was very good- a well written, low angst forced marriage scenario which resulted in Lizzy falling in love rather easily and rapidly once the situation forced them together. I really enjoyed reading the missing letters and the drama they created, as well as Lizzy's trust in Darcy during his silence. I particularly like how you portray both the main characters and I've downloaded another of your stories to read as a result of how much I enjoyed this one.

I liked this chapter.

Yes it ha the same name on Amazon. She has two others books as well. Her book, Loves Fool the taming of Lydia Bennet is my favorite. That story is the sequel to Mr Darcy's persistant pursuit. The Lydia book is a new storyline and introduces some new characters. Who would have thought that I would come to adore Lydia and her husband?

Does the story have the same title on Amazon?

agh well now im really curious to read how she ends up forced to marry him

it started out as a very nice story but, the least you could do is leave it as incomplete so people don't waste their time reading the 3 chapters you posted, thinking this was a completed read. that is just ignorant.

Read your story here and then purchased a copy for my permanent library as I would like to read it again and again. It is well worth the money. Thank you for sharing your stories with us for free on ff as you develop them. It has been a joy to watch. I am so glad to see your book doing well. I look forward to next book. You keep writing and I will keep reading. Together we will all have a great time. I am glad to support your work as you support my reading habit.

I also want you to know that my elderly mother refuses to use any kind of computer device-except to read your books. When I load one on my iPad and give it to her, she will read it to the end. Any other time, she refuses to use an electronic device by herself. I am hopeful, that if you write enough books, that one day she will become comfortable enough using an iPad, that she might surf the net on her own. One can always dream!

Nice wrap up to the story. I wish you the best. Looking forward to your next book. Thank you for sharing it with us. I have a hard time putting your stories down and am always sad when there is no more to read.

I'm with several others who commented on pulling your story so soon, and I also didn't get tp read the conclusion..
Not generous. Certainly I won't buy it.
MG

so, you pull off your story... thank you very much! You know, there are people who don't sit every day on ffnet and only wait for stories, we also have a life and don't have a time to read jaffs every day! You want a respect from us, you want comments, you want reviews so please respect us as a readers, because now you will get money form this book but it will be thanks to us! Or at least thanks to others because i will not buy it. Awful done! Sad...

Thank you for sharing this with us. I did not have time to read it this time around (I kept up with you before), but I plan to buy your book when I have a chance. Congratulations!

What happened to the story? I thought it would be here 2 weeks... Claudia

So, if I want to know the ending I have to buy the book?
Sorry, not going to happen. At least I will know better next time a story posts.

I wish you great success with your publication of this book. It has been a joy to read, and I have greatly enjoyed every thrilling chapter. :)

Well, I'm sorry that I didn't have the time or patience to leave you a review sooner (in any other chapter), but I must admit that seeing you had already so many reviews, made me feel not so guilty :P.
Just wanted to say this is a wonderful story and I'm not surprised you got published, you're obviously a very good writer. Thank you though, for taking the time to share your story with us for free, it was a delight to read it.
I hope you don't delete the whole story, it would serve both as a teaser for future buyers of your book, and also as a reminder for those of us who have read it and might want to buy it in the future.
P.S. If there's something you don't understand of my review it's probably because english is not my first language... Or because my phone keeps changing what I write, hehe.