Oh man! I love this story, I love the way it was told with feelings and fears and passion. Thank you for sharing.

Swearing swears - that's cool verbiage. You rock.

Massive love for this chapter!

And Will...really? You're going to yell at the kid for being sad and seeking comfort from a Good Man. That's rich. Well, Edward, that seemed like an easy fix. You couldn't have figured that out before you let Toby know the deal? Poor Toby.

Everything about this...the pace, Toby, Edward's forays into fatherhood, Bella's sexy...is keeping me on edge, in such a good way. Adore the last line.

I love how your sentences sometimes give more feeling than words. It's awesome, the way you write. The feelings you can invoke.

I love, love, love his jealousy. It's possessive and building. She is so lovable and fun and crazy - no wonder all the boys are sniffing around her ankles. It's cool you gave her a bunch of brothers and a son. Poor Edward, I feel for his situation and his sister, but I don't pity him. I think he's moving forward with just the right amount of baby steps. Great characters here.

Awesome
I love the writing style
Thank you

Loved loved loved this story. Thanks for sharing.

I just found this story, it's very cute, I loved it!

I just reread this, and wanted to say how much I still love this story. Such beautiful souls and so beautifully written. X

Nothing quite like big talks with jizz breath! ;)

What a great chapter to cap off the life and times of young Toby William Swan Wilder.
Thanks for a great story.

Toby's indignation over Ava was adorable.
His approval of Edward's mission to marry his mom, priceless.

It took Toby's pain to finally make the adults choose a different course of action. Why wasn't he considered in the first round of decisions?

Bella's opportunity for a fulfilling career pitted against a secure and happy life for her and Toby...Hm. Edward may not want to hold her back. He may push her into this job at the expense of his own happiness.