Man this story was really huge but impressive.

Really,you shows Ash always like the dumb childish fool ;)

Oh man Ash is really a childish fool in your story ;)

Just one more sequel! Pleeease!

I am so very impressed :). this was a genuinly good story. i loved it all the way through.
right now it is 1:00, that is how long i stayed up to read this. very nicly done

I love the trilogy. Since you were suggesting short stories maybe one that in seven years if ash and misty got married and misty is going to have a baby. Then Reilly is seven and what does he want to be. For example follow his big brother or stay in school. This would maybe be another book and not a short story but I believe you can create something with this.

I did not realize wouldn't accept my full review, so I have to leave the other half on chapter 22. I'm so sorry about that! Well, here is the other half:

Most importantly, one of the most pivotal scenes, is of course Delia's sudden break down after Ash's accidental escapade in the woods. Again, I do not have words. You're such a master with emotions, us sympathizing with one character then back to the other. Neither Ash nor Delia deserved what they were going through and the tension just builds and builds till Delia's unexpected delivery, taking Ash's not so wise choice of words to heart. Now EVERYONE is worried about her, and thankfully Jay steps in hastily. One could only imagine what he's thinking, watching the love of his life not feel like herself or exhibit her normal behaviors.. you feel for the guy! This time, he's the one who has to be the calm and considerate one to sort out the matters instead of his wife. The subtle hints Delia's body as given concerning her state during the course of time and Jay's rightful worrying growing as he remains baffled by her behavior and continuation of feeling ill... WOW. Just wow. You really kicked up some emotions between these two, which was needed. Their entire dialogue was perfect between Jay's utterly confused state to being shell-shocked by his hysterical wife's reveal of their loss. This scene really showed a very sensitive side to Jay, being the shoulder to lean on when Delia's needing all the comfort in the world. I think as tragic as their loss it, it strengthens their relationship, knowing they will always look out for one another.

From there, we are also supplied with a heartwarming makeup of apologies between Ash and Delia. Always love those scenes without a doubt! I know I keep saying this about everything, but I really did like how Jay brought Ash back up and for them all to discuss the hapless situation his mother underwent so he can fully understand everything that has occurred. This connected them as a family so much, Delia admitting her faults than Ash confessing his... In the end, nothing can be kept between this incredible mother and son duo. And their both humble enough people to admit when they are in the wrong at dire times. Must be genetic. ;p They both feel downright terrible for the misunderstanding, and simply talking everything out cleared the air to the point where they could reconcile in time for the reception. This scene was needed and I am amazed on how well you handled it so flawlessly. The line alone of when Ash said he'd help his mom if she and Jay decided to try for a baby again- SO CUTE. Aww, love him so much and it's sooo in character!

Now to the big event we all have anxiously waiting for. Delia and Jay's reception was so picture-perfect, fun, and sublime way to make their renewal official. They make such a sweet couple and deserve to celebrate a new step in their marriage. Everything from the entire household getting ready to the event to the actual party was fantastic to read. However, I think the big Pokemon battle between Ash and Gary HAS to be addressed. These two are forever butting-heads, which I admittedly love, yet feel frustrated about for Ash's parents' sake. He clearly wasn't thinking when challenging Gary and nearly destroying a good portion of the reception. Man, the kid can sure hold a grudge. That isn't really surprising, is it? As we have discussed before, battle scenes aren't exactly a cakewalk to write. But I think you did a wonderful job with description! Truly, I do. And as enjoyable as the battle was to read, we get a heated argument between Jay and Ash. Man, he has proven himself a force to be reckoned with, both intimidating and commanding in some respects. If anyone whips Ash into shape, it's his dad, and a part of me cannot blame him after watching the destruction of his wedding reception. All in all though, the reception had a very happy and pleasing ending for all which I relished between every smile and anxious awaiting of resulting drama. ;)

As you know, I also favor childhood stories between Ash and Gary and reading chapter 20 alone... I loved this addition in this already meaty tale! My review is getting awfully long, but I did want you to know how much I savored all of the boys' discussion and at last mending their broken friendship to at leas something... tolerable and respectable. I think we'd all like to envision they'd be friends and see past their animosity for one another, but alas, with everything that's happened it's near impossible. But at least admitting their wrongdoings and seeing eye to eye- that's some progress. And it's a step in the right direction with the fact that they ended up reminiscing anyway. PLUS Ash feeling that they might as well give their estrange friendship another shot... the kids sure has a forgiving heart, doesn't he? And apparently, Gary humility in him too. I also think it was an excellent use of Ash's time while his parents were away. To finally set things straight for the better! :)

Now for the actual ending... it could not get better than that. Oh, I don't even know where to start! I think it was smart and just perfect that you wrote an ENTIRE chapter about the delivery and gave us updates on how the pregnancy went and Ash's overall enthrallment with a new baby brother or sister on the way. It almost calls for a story all about Delia's second pregnancy and everyone's involvement! ;) lol. Anyway, not only was the Ketchum family memorable in this chapter, but your creative development for the doctor was comical and entertaining during such a serious time. The "I wanna hold your hand line," made me chuckle. Oh, Dr. Mazzei you goof. I agree so much with your depiction of Ash about his mom's pregnancy it's not even funny. Ash would definitely be invested in it, because to him it's wonderful news that he can't help but he a part of. While some may argue Ash might get jealous over a sibling in the house, I don't think he would. At least, at this age. He's beginning his early teen years and seeing his family pieced back together, he wants to be a part of it all even learning all about pregnancy. Aww, it's just so cute! You truly nailed some family feels throughout the whole story, but especially in the end thanks to none other than lil' Riley. I could have seen it go either way; Delia and Jay having another son or a girl. But I loved your approach nonetheless. And them all gathered their new bundle of joy, all admiring him and seeing how far they had come as a family- it was terrific ending. Really. I don't think there was any other way you could have wrapped this up to make it more special. Solid material, and a happy ending for our Ketchum family. They deserved every bit of it. :)

What can I say about BH as a whole? It made me sit on the edge of my seat as it brought about some real emotions between all the characters. So much to say to squeeze into just one review. I hope I have gushed enough in detail to show my appreciation for your work. Because I honestly do. I truly enjoyed it, and thank you for all your hard work. It was a delight to read. All the romance, family drama, humor, and development of emotions/relationships... really amazing work! Thank you again, Spook! :D

First off, let me apologize for taking so long to get this review to you, Spook. I know you have been very patient and I appreciate it more than I can say. I can also appreciate how much time and depth you put into your third installment of your series. :D This is going to be one long review, and I hope I can encompass as much of the plot, highlighting important twists in the story while indulging in some of my favorite scenes and such.

Let me just say, the way you started off this story was a brilliant idea. The meaningful concept of Jay and Delia renewing their vows NEEDED to be done, and I just adore how each of the kids is eager to throw in their input not for their own satisfaction but to make the day a memorable one indeed. Already you have us engrossed in a few subjects: Misty and Ash tackling the ever so tricky relationship of boyfriend/girlfriend and Delia learning to let go a little of Ash while in the midst of strengthening her marriage. Such wonderful juicy content! I can TOTALLY see Delia being a real worry-wart about her only son dating, ESPECIALLY at such a young and vulnerable age. I think with time as Ash ages and matures Delia would be less protective and more accepting of the idea. However, given the circumstances to come... oy vey, this poor woman faces a lot of hardship!
But as for how Ash and Misty's relationship is displayed throughout this entire fic... I think it's true to their characters early on the show as well as represents how they might handle the situation at their age. Ash is all gun-ho in the beginning with dating, scared but excited nonetheless. In particular, the chapter when he and Misty were arguing over seeing "First Comes Love" or "Vile Strife" had me both laughing and shaking my head. Oh, Ash. You don't get it yet, do you? ;) Which leads to that ADORABLE exchange between he and Jay. Love how he tries to fill his son in on the simple tips of dating, all for them together as much as Ash and Misty are about it. It's definitely in character for Delia to be the anxious and worried one about THINGS that come with dating, while Jay tries to see the matter in a logical and calm perspective. Though, unintentionally or not, Delia IS putting a slight wedge between them with her fixation, and of course we know this worry turns into turmoil that Jay cannot seem to identify on his own- but I am getting ahead of myself!

And speaking of another adorable couple, can we please talk about Jay and Delia? Because they are so freakin' cute together it makes me grin like a mad woman. LOL I just love how you developed their chemistry! He's so laid back, warm, and caring for her in a way you'd hope a husband would be. I loved the idea of them both being for a baby, and that it would only enhance their healing relationship as well as grow their already loving family. They're obviously devoted parents who deserve a chance to start over with a clean slate. And I completely agree with you on Delia's desperate want for another child. As you said in your story, she has enough love for ten kids, and is definitely mother material. :)

Though not everything stays as rosy and peachy as we readers would like to hope. But given how both you and I write, conflict is bond to occur one way or another! ;) And man, did you lay it on thick! I would have never expected for Delia to have a miscarriage, nor for it to fuel the fire for more drama to come. Such an excellent twist! Delia really does spiral down a dark path, and though while I understand she wanted to save her pregnancy as a surprise for Jay after the wedding- girl, you needed to SAY SOMETHING. Which, is something I believe we all are thinking in the back of our minds, as the story continues to unfold. It would be unbelievably devastating and discouraging to not only have one miscarriage but two if one wished to have more children. I don't think you can necessarily blame Delia for feeling depressed, crushed, and simply out of sorts- but all in all, she became a different person in the process. I think that shows vulnerability and insecurity in Delia, something we don't see in the show and I appreciate the fact that you gave her more depth with her emotions, seeing we are all bound to act differently given the circumstance. And after a while, who are we to judge? I don't think one could understand experience unless one has been in the same boat before. Especially since she's already not feeling like her usual bubbly self. Poor girl! :(

Now back to Ash and Misty... there are just too many fantastic scenes I don't know where to start. Them simply going on a date to the movies was innocent and sweet next to Delia taking Brock out for a haircut just for fun! And boy, did that bring about jealousy! It did not surprise me at all for Ash to get jealous over Misty's adoration for Brock's hair. Harmless it was, this kid loves attention and seeing Misty is now his girlfriend, he probably doesn't like the idea of her focus going onto another guy. And Delia DEFINITELY didn't like the idea of Ash dying his hair. Yikes! Even Brock and Misty knew to get the heck out of there when they could, never imagining Delia would get so angry. Loved Jay's reaction to it all though, breaking up the tension between mother and son after Delia asked him what he thought about: "I dunno. Looks kinda neat." But in all seriousness, this only builds to Delia's soon to be misfortune. Which is so heart-wrenching. You feel so torn for her, wanting to sympathize with her so badly but then side with Jay and Ash who are completely lost and dumbfounded by Delia's mood-swings and upsets. Again, I cannot express how much this brought about raw emotions on such a delicate and touchy subject. I also think the second installment focused a tad more on Ash and Jay's relationship while this one leans more to Ash and Delia instead. I really liked that. Having a story that each tackled Ash and one of his parents' relationship with him.

Not to mention, we get a brief heartwarming scene with Misty and Delia too. Gotta love these two gals, even if they are opposites in some respect. As Misty grows older I can see her relying on Delia as a motherly figure and chatting constantly with her about things (like their soap operas lol) as mutual friends which to a degree leaves Ash rolling his eyes a little. Your mom and your best friend just click as friends! Better get used to it. ;) Back to the actual content, I enjoyed the fact that Misty was the one to bring light to Delia on Ash's true intention because he wished to impress his girlfriend. Love the exchange between the two, and honestly I don't know how much I can express my admiration for it in words. It really was a terrific scene.

After this, we get one of the- if not the most- depressing and emotional scene in BH. The bittersweet turned horrific dream Delia endures then her realization that she had a miscarriage in the night... I don't have words. Really raw and powerful stuff right there. Like I said earlier, I don't think anyone would could understand such an experience unless one has been there themselves. And it's so discouraging for a woman like Delia. My heart goes out to her; she's so giving and loving as it already is, and deserves another chance to have a baby as her healing marriage succeeds. We as the readers want a happy ending for she and Jay- however, complications are likely to happen. But this one surely was unexpected. The scene was very well-written and bravo to you as a writer for tackling such a sensitive subject. This was a wonderful execution and definitely leaves us readers wondering what exactly is going to come about this unfortunate turn of events, how Delia will cope with it all.

So through more misunderstanding chaos, you lead us to Delia's worries continuously eating at her and pressuring Jay to put Misty in another room for the night. No more Ethel jokes for you Ash! Both for Misty's sake and your poor mother's constant worrying of the worst case scenario. My heart continues to go out to Delia as she remains in this fragile state... Though in the process of the debate over the matter and the carrying on of secrets, we eventually get to the delightful treat of those creepy pictures in the sitting room Misty has to stay in. Ash's lines really had me laughing, in particular his retort to Misty about the "evil" photos of his some odd great- grandparents! "So what? Doesn't mean they still aren't whacked out and ugly! Do you ever see me go in here? Huh? Those things creep me out! They give me weird looks, Misty." Yes, but Ash they ARE your great-great-grandparents whether they have come beyond the dead to stare at you through old pictures or not. lol. Oh Ash, even as you grow up and mature please don't completely change that kid inside you. You're just too stinkin' funny to let that happen. ;p

Still on the subject of Ash, there is something I'd like to point out through my observations. One thing I've noticed about your Ash is that he's very defiant and I think is a testimony to what he was like in the earlier seasons. Ash is the kind of kid who stands up for what he believes in, and while sometimes doesn't have the humility to step down when needed, does prove to be an honest and noble character in his own right. As kids, we all makes PLENTY of mistakes and while Ash learns from this, you can't shake this kid's determination away. Call it stubbornness, but what Ash channels it correctly he creates definite determination. I just love the way you characterize him!

Just on a random side note, in chapter 4 in which the kids are playing Scattergories in the beginning, OMG I loved that! Ash saying Ebeneezer Scrooge for an athlete was one of his best lines yet! Then the whole talk about Booberry ceral- I agree with Brock, how can you NOT know about Booberry?! Ash and Misty sure were deprived of sugary cereal goodness! Random I know, but I had to throw it out there. It may be minor, but it's still a scene I love. Includ

Awesome story!

Very great I was almost in tears to see this trtrilogy end

This was a great story from the very beginning. I loved every second spent reading it. Keep up the good stories

Why was ash always getting into trouble

You should definitely write a story in the future with ash and misty getting married, and in a chapter, them having their own first baby!

The part where Ash made such a big deal over cleaning the and how he felt afterwards. I know exactly how he feels. I do that kind of stuff all the time. And I feel terrible about it. Sometimes I don't know how to keep my big mouth shut. And I'm almost 16 years old!
Your stories are very good and the emotions you put into it are very accurate to real life. Keep up the awesome work!

This story was freakin awesome! Kind of hoping to see another that takes place several years later with Ash and Misty. Fingers Crossed!