I like this fanfic and you should make more chapters of this fanfic pleases.

Omg it's so sad!

Dude, you're killing me here! I really really really really really really really REALLY want to read this please UPDATE!

Come on next chapter

Good concept you've got going here. Also, welcome to the fandom ;)
I'm sure you're aware there were a few spelling/grammatical errors. I would just suggest reading over it before publishing or ask someone else to proofread for you.
From what you've described thus far, I think this storyline has a lot of potential. I'd like to see you put more details into what you're describing if you can. You have a good style and I can get into it, just try not to rush the things you want to happen! Believe me, I know it's hard (I agonize over this myself lol) but part of what makes a really gripping fic is the anticipation leading up to the drama. Details are your friend!
I like the premise you have going here and I'll be keeping an eye out for more. :) Happy writing!

Must have more! Update soon please!

I wonder how long has Helga been in a coma. If Arnold is there with her. I'm surprised she is still alive. After mixing bleach and vodka together. Please update when you can.

Seems good so far, couple spelling mistakes but otherwise pretty intriguing. Looking to the next chapter

Oh my god! *cries* Please continue, I want to see how this ends.

Aww yea so powerful why no sex? Plz update soon, just try to imagine them doing that, leading up to dat