That was hilarious! Seriously, that was AWESOME! I could totally see it being in canon, or filler or something!

Awww~ The marine part and the compliment part with chopper was obvious, but the muscles?

Oh Luffy, you'll bulk up eventually :D

LOL Sanji and Zoro yelling how they like and respect each other, it's hilarious. Too perfect.

And yes, you can't outrun a coward.

Poor Usopp, getting teased about his nose. LAY OFF THURGOOD!

Oh no, THEY'RE ON THE LOOSE!

The zoro blurting out truth was great. But the part where Nami hit Sanji in the forehead?! And he falls backwards, dropping the tray I thought "Luffy, catch it with your mouth!"

LMAO AND HE DID! That scene was gold, worth 50 points! ROFL I applaud you, that was SO a luffy thing to do. _

ROFL And Luffy telling Sanji that Nami thinks Zoro is hot! ROFL Their reactions, and poor Sanji, getting Depressed. :( I love the guy, he needs a good woman.

"Your stupid gold ball blew up!"

"His WHAT blew up?" Robin blinked.

I got that, Japanese culture, gold balls another word for...mans low hangers :D XD

Boy, your just killing it! This is another 500 points.

LOL Oh no, a IDIOT DID BUY IT!

usopp: "HEY!"

Awesome story. I just couldn't stop laughing XD
Thank you!

I liked Luffy's confessions and his reaction to the muscle confession. Zoro and Sanji's were also wonderful.

Funny fic

PURE BRILLIANCE, I DIED LAUGHING OH GOSH AHAHA, man, what a wonderful read!

This is one of the best OP stories I'm read in ages! The Characters are spot on, the jokes had me laughing the whole way through, and the idea was so much fun. Brilliant! One piece can be tricky to find good stories where the original tone makes it through and I'm delighted and you did such an awesome job. Kudos!

I enjoyed reading this! Especially Zoro and Sanji's part

This was a One Piece episode worthy script right here!
I can easily see it playing out in anime- and it's really fun too! Kudos to you and your story!

This was awesome! Sanji and Zoro's truths were by far the best! XDDDDDDDD

I really must say that of all the OCs on this site I respect the ones in this story the most. Good job with this story! Your writing style was easy to read and I didn't notice any errors (though I didn't actively search for any). All and all I found this story really good.

OH MY GOD

I absolutely love how the Zoro/Sanji argument had an honesty spin.

"I RESPECT YOU SWIRLS!"
"I RESPECT YOU TOO, MOSSHEAD!"

That is the best thing I have ever read.

AWESOME! Loved the Zoro and Nami bit, that was hilarious. I could just imagine their voices getting all calm and matter-of-fact as they told their truths.