You are a good writer and thank you for filling in the gaps in the stories

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God, this is beautiful. I love the line about Lisbln thinking Jane wasn't into touch but in truth he was starved for hers.

*sigh* Soo very lovely and romantic! :)

*sigh* Awww that was absolutely wonderfully written! :)

)))))))) Awwww, so cute tho even they are sick, but still together! Very nice piece of art from you!
To me Jane's POV sounded more realistic, idk why, but it did.
But still no matter what this was very beautiful and promising... Wish we had more of that on the screen to enjoy! Ahhh

This was truly beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

Oh and I didn't know holding hands would be such a sweet and "right" thing between them! I wish we could see more of that and maybe a kiss on the forehead. Alright, "touch" is definitely an very interesting theme.

I was just thinking about this fiction, the theme "touch" and how in 7x05 Jane lays his arm around Lisbon when they're leaving the FBI. There has been an increase of intimacy in the last episodes despite Lisbon's wish to keep their relationship private. Most of it, it's been very subtle and in private but some moments clearly show an outsider they're more than colleagues, anyway that last scene made me think about... Cho! At this point, I'm finding it hard to believe that a police detective, FBI agent, even if slightly blind by the old friendship between those two, can't see something is different... However, I'm assuming he still thinks there's nothing going on and I'm wondering how he's going to find out on the show and what your take would be.
I'd also like to read a tag from you because I died a little when Jane nonchalantly said he was happy for the first time in however long and that he was scared! Oh my god! I just really want you to treasure us with something right now!

Chapter two was perfect but I enjoyed all of it. Thank you! Looks liie Teresa will follow Jane where ever he may go just to try and make him happy but at the same tme she realizes there could be a better match out there for him - generous as she is and loyal as he is -:its a fitting relationship.
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Beautiful!

This is adorable! I love it!

How do you manage to write these sentences that make my tummy flip over? Thank you :)

Beautifully written, thanks. :-)

Oh god, this one is definitely going down in my list of favorites! It's so perfect and beautiful. I loved hearing about the way they feel about it all. Just the way you put it is just exactly how I see it being! It feels right! And so heartwarmingly perfect!