I'm not even sure if you'll bother reading, let alone do anything, with my review... but here it goes anyways. First off I wanna tell you that I think you've written a sensational, creative and extremely addictive fic here... and I really would like it if you'd write more... please? I just... I've never read anything like this before... I've never read a fic where Yami had to struggle with even the simplest aspects of being in a living and breathing body, food, waste, bathing, cardio, brushing teeth, to the more difficult and/or embarrassing things and I just... I'm awed that you've already put so much detail into this fic and now... gods, now I'd hungering for more! And, by the way, I've already seen this fic as a Prideshipping one in the very first chapter cuz... honestly? I doubt very much Kaiba would bother stopping his car and insisting that Yami get in and than take him to his mansion... yes, to duel him, but to also help him release the stress and frustration that had been bubbling inside of him... and no one wants Yami to go off. Get the feeling he'd be terrifying... and might mind crush people. Um, anyways, maybe that's just me reading too much into it cuz I like Prideshipping, but I really do think you have the makings of something exceptional and captivating here and it would be a shame to stop here. So, please, update?

OH GOD.
Short chapter, but nontheless absolutely adorable.
I am completely in love.
And then I checked the update date.
My heart sank as deeply as the Titanic.
Hopefully you are only on a brief hiatus and would be back ;A;
Please dont leave us hanging for too long *sob*

AWWWWWW.
I really need to stop gushing but this is waaaay too cute.
And I love how you are taking it slow!
I guess Yami didn't get all of his memories back? Only the body?
*Sigh
sounds like he's anorexic... ;A;
The poor pharaoh.
But having his priest taking care of him TT tooo cute!
AND how are you managing to keep kaiba in character through all this fluff is beyond me!
Love it love it love it! 3

AWWWW THIS IS SO CUTE! 3
I AM SO HAPPY THIS IS A MULTI-CHAPTER THINGGG
AND SETO IS SOOO SWEET.
Cases like this, I suspect that he liked Yami (a lot) whether he knew it or not!
next chappie here I come!
/shit really should be working...

this is awesome :) i hope you continue

Please update soon I am loving this story!

ああああもう!！！ 次はどこですか？ あなたのストリはまじでおもしろいだぜ！

I really like this take on what would have happened had Yami stayed with the group. GO SETO MAKE HIM EAT FOOD! I hope you update soon~

This story is so interesting! :D I really like how Yami can just confess to Kaiba his thoughts and how Kaiba just understands him. I hope you have a good day!

I like this so far. I hope you continue on.

You say you were iffy about the chapter, but it came pretty good to me, a bit small, but good nonetheless. And take your time figuring out what you want to do with the story and the way it suits you best to proceed. As long as it comes out good, all wait is worthy ;D

.AUehara

I fall in love with your fanfic. So much writters enjoy making Yami stay in japan and win a new body, and make the change like something easy, I love that you are showing the issues about having a body since all the time that he had in the puzzle. Their fears look so natural and I like the choise you are making to give him... I always think about how sad and horrorfic shoud have be live into the puzzle, all the darkness and lonliness.

I really like the way Kaiba is playing around Yami, it looks natural, I like it. Keep doing you are making a beautiful work. Hope read more of you...sorry for the bad english, it's not may native language but I reaaaaally wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying your fanfic

Besos

I love this story so much! I really hope that you continue it. I just adore how you've written their relationship and the situation with his new body.

Yep, I definitely like this Kaiba. I don't know, he is just really funny to me. So, are you evolving this story into a multi-chaptered one? It'd be awesome!

.Atsuko Uehara

This Kaiba Seto, was perfect! That sort of tsundere attitude of his, it is just so unbelievable hilarious! I can't get enough of it. Also, this scenario with our dearest pharaoh not entirely comfortable with Yugi and the group is one I've been thinking about recently. To me, it just seems right. I really like it. Not to mention, Kaiba fit in it perfectly, and seriously "You sound like me. It doesn't suit you" was just so damn hilarious! Loved it!

.Atsuko Uehara