Reviews for Sengoku Berry
BK-209 chapter 4 . 9/30/2019
I like Imagawa-chan please give me more!
Nikkless chapter 1 . 2/9/2019
so what use is ichigo if he cant go into Shinigami form
anonymous chapter 4 . 3/3/2017
Please update.
SomethingAncient chapter 4 . 9/17/2016
Alright, it's not that bad, but there are a few incorrectly spelled words I noticed that were repeated. 'Thought' is the past tense to 'think', not 'though'. And quite a few times the word 'been' was used when it should have been 'being'.

Now it has been a while since you updated this story so maybe you are already aware of this now. However, if you want further clarification just ask me and I'll do my best to explain.

This may just be a typo, but at the end of the third paragraph the spelling of the word "least" should be 'lest'.

Other than the spelling ther are sections where the wording could use clarification since too much was sometimes compacted in one paragraph. This is also possibly why you felt it was rushed at some point. One of these areas is:

"'That guy really is a pervert.' though Ichigo 'First he gropes Katsue, then declared he wants the most beautiful girl in the world for himself, then opposes Nobuna's marriage and above all, screams like a banshee when he learned Yoshimoto is to stay with me.""

The first evidence was not exactly well explained as to why he was allowed to do so in the previous chapter, so it's obvious but does little to reveal much about the character. Also, who did the groping? I'm not exactly sure what happened with all that.

The second evidence arbitrarily describes the most beautiful girl in the world. Who does this refer to?

The third evidence was contradictory because in the preceding paragraph (not proceeding) he made the proposal, so I don't know why he's suddenly opposing the marriage.

"Screams like a banshee" is a little over the top and is an attempt to demonize the character further, which is fine, but considering the political pressure I am unsure if it's because Yoshimoto is hated or because he wants his way with her.

Anyway, if you don't mind some advice, Yoshimoto should start to develop a better personality around Ichigo. He has saved her life, which is a huge deal; but the bigger thing is that Ichigo is different than most people. This should be obvious to Yoshimoto and should have her thinking about Ichigo's role in her life more. And since she believed she couldn't be a bride anymore, Ichigo's willingness to put up with her and not care about that might have her seeing him as the only willing candidate.

Anyway, that's my opinion, so good luck, have a good month(s), and God bless.
SomethingAncient
SomethingAncient chapter 2 . 9/17/2016
This is interesting and I like it, which is a bit of a surprise personally. But I want to point one thing out: Ichigo is a genius when it comes to combat.

Sure, he lacks a specific technique, but from his battles we see that Ichigo actually figured out the techniques of people with around a hundred years of training (Ikkaku, for example). His reflexes are top notch and his way of wielding a sword is actually difficult to counter.

So, while his technique is lacking in the uniform sense, his unpredictability makes him that much more of a threat.

Now, I don't intend to single out this story, there are many stories that do this; but I don't understand why. Ichigo is probably just as good, if not better, than most of the people he will face. He may not have his powers, but that doesn't mean he needs to re-learn how to fight.

That aside, everything else seems to be done well so far.
bigmac1 chapter 4 . 4/29/2016
cool story.
anonymous chapter 4 . 2/4/2016
Please update soon.
jiubantai-taichoCalmejaneJose chapter 4 . 11/20/2015
Good story I however have only seen/read Bleach and would like to see the nobunaga girls lol but anyways I vote for an IchigoxHarem fic please update SOON
flaming hunter chapter 4 . 10/24/2015
It laks details but other than that its good
Pedro52 chapter 1 . 10/4/2015
coooolll
frytrix chapter 4 . 9/30/2015
looking forward to read more.
Telron chapter 4 . 8/7/2015
lol poor ichigo and good story so far
HeroBladeRiyet chapter 4 . 5/27/2015
This is interesting
Guest chapter 3 . 5/19/2015
Lol you stuck with her ichigo...now he has a waifu.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/19/2015
Please make more this is just awsome
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