Damn this is really good, Your writing is amazing I didn't expect to find such A good story so soon after the final, But I guess I did, It would be really nice if you made more to this but if you don't it's fine to because this does not need it it's perfect just the way it is XD

This was so sweet, great writing too. You should make a series out of this

Really well written. The pace, flow, and imagery were all so vivid. You kept the tense spot on. There was no switching about between present and past. No 'was's' or 'were's' that I saw either. No head hopping. Awesome!

You also depicted their relationship really nicely. It wasn't forced. It just flowed like it should. I got a sense of who they were and how they felt. Bravo. I loved it.

Thank you for writing this, is very beautiful and a mature way to view the Korrasami :)