Reviews for Four Days on a Train
Samantha Morse chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
Oh. Cute. I see you stay put with the names you choose.
Shemiki chapter 5 . 7/20/2015
Ah, I just love stories like these. It really is a testament to the strength of Kataang and to the strength of your writing when the characters of Aang and Katara can fall in love in such a short timespan and still be so believable simply because it is the natural way the pairing should progress. I really loved the concept behind this story, and while partial credit does go to the Tumblr prompt that got you started most of the credit should still go to you as it was you who brought it to life and made it such a fun and fluffy story. Aang and Katara are both very believable in their assigned roles; Aang's playful and cheerful personality makes him an ideal candidate for an artist, and Katara being the COO of a family company is also very believable giving her traits of responsibility and caring for others; this is easily transferable into a corporate world.

There is one issue I have, and it is not specifically with your fic but with your writing in general: it's not "should of," it's "should have" or "should've." It's a very minor error, but it shouldn't be in stories of such a high quality as yours.
Supergoddad chapter 5 . 4/28/2015
Great little story!
Goldenwings chapter 5 . 3/31/2015
I just admire you... Beautiful story keep it up and don't forget the suspense...
megamegaturtle chapter 5 . 2/4/2015
I really can see Aang being an artist in modern day. It fits him so well.
Britmysta chapter 5 . 1/23/2015
This was super cute. Nice and fluffy read. Thanks for posting it!
Ashley Barbosa chapter 5 . 1/17/2015
The perfect ending for a perfect fic! Fantastic job, as always!
Logan1300 2.0 chapter 5 . 1/19/2015
This was great, sad to see it go so well, at least I still have your other fics!:D
Jnoas chapter 5 . 1/16/2015
Very nicely done. The story was great throughout the entire fiction Aang and Katara are written very good. Love the AU pretty cool idea to have bending a normal thing but the Avatar a myth. Would love to see a sequel where perhaps it gets revealed that Aang is the Avatar. But anyway, great story, characterization, pacing and overall feel of the fiction. 9/10
Aggressively Hospitable chapter 5 . 1/16/2015
Awwww, is this it or will there be more? I loved it. It's balanced and we'll paced. You master kataanger you. ;)
Free2rhyme164 chapter 5 . 1/16/2015
I loved the story by the way it's awesome
:)
Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2015
So awesome
Love this story so much
Ashley Barbosa chapter 4 . 1/7/2015
Oh Gosh, you are so in trouble Katara, but Aang probably will forgive you. Update sooner! Please!
TheDreammlkj chapter 4 . 1/8/2015
I actually hadn't made the connection that you were the writer of they met on the Internet. For some reason I'm not actually following you as a writer, which is weird becuase I've enjoyed everything you've wrote and I thought I had followed you. However, I have now corrected my problem and applaud your writing!
Logan1300 2.0 chapter 4 . 1/7/2015
Can't wait to see what happens next! :D
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