| Reviews for The Evolution of Organized Crime |
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WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 12 . 7/10 Beware the Shadow King! |
WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 11 . 7/10 The Host Club has no idea that they just got involved with the yakuza do they? |
WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 10 . 7/10 Ouran! Ouran! Ouran! Also Haruhi is making friends! What a cutie patootie! Also I stand by what I said. World. Domination. Hey, that boy she met in the police station, that was Honey, right? I mean based on attitude I would say the boy was Chika but he said he was 2 years older than her soo... Honey? If it was him I wonder if he'll recognise her. And what wild speculations would come of it. Heeheee! |
WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 9 . 7/10 I... don't think she got the honey trap thing. Sweet, inocent, naive Haruhi. You don't get it at all. |
WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 8 . 7/10 You know the worst part of everything being from Haruhi's perspective? It's that you know something is going on but you don't know what! Ugh! Also I'm like 89% sure that people think Haruhi and Ritsu are engaged. |
WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 7 . 7/10 *The next day a newspaper clipping about a bank robbery the next town over was sitting on their refrigerator.* You know, it didn't click last time, buuuuutt I'm pretty sure Ranka thinks Haruhi robbed a bank. Also, can I have Ranka as a dad? His daughter who want to become a lawyer, is best friends with the yakuza hier and who he believes robs banks, he loves enough to put it all aside because it makes her happy. Wow! What a awesome dad! Give him aplaus everybody! |
WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 6 . 7/10 Gets kidnapped. Makes friends. Ends a turf war before it begins. Is this the start of world domination? |
WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 4 . 7/10 Prioritise the insanity. Lol! That's a new one! |
WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 3 . 7/10 Wall of Doom: No one can defeat me! Haruhi: Oh, look a stain.*shrubs enthusiastic! * Wall of Doom: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *death* |
WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 2 . 7/10 Been accused of changing gender! Lol. It's my favourite line! |
WILDSPARK-PRIME chapter 1 . 7/10 I've read this fic once before an it was so awesome I just had to read it again! This, is personal my favourite Ouran fic. I like Ritsu. He's so cool and he just doesn't get enough attention, you know? It's actually really sad. There aren't a lot of fic's about him or with him in it, and this? Where he and Haruhi are best buds since childhood? It's the best. Simply awesome! |
FromTheInsideOut2 chapter 12 . 6/29 So glad I noticed there were chapter updates for this story! I love what you have done thus far and cannot wait to see what Haruhi has to deal with next! Happy writing! |
Maay chapter 12 . 6/24 It's good to see you again! This chapter was a ride from start to finish, as usual. Haruhi is a gem. Thank you for posting! |
WysteriaHysteria chapter 12 . 6/22 When I found this story, I had no idea that I had struck a cave full of gold! I love the characters personalities, how they’re not ooc but are still reacting naturally to events and people. I love how you wrote child haruhi and child ritsu, I feel like their dynamic and attitudes really worked well together. And then when haruhi dad found out that haruhi was friends w yakuza he just went v rapidly through the five stages of grief, and then was like ‘ok I’m glad that you have friends :D’. It’s v cool that haruhi is repairing the vase w the gold, I wonder if she’ll keep it or give it back? Because if she’s in debt to the host club over it, didn’t she buy it in a way? I’m curious to see where haruhi recognizes hani from as well, though it might’ve been in a previous chapter and I didn’t recognize it for the foreshadowing it was. That’s what happens when I stay up too late and fall asleep partway through though! But yeah I just binged this and I do not regret a second! Have a good one, stay safe! |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/20 3 Thank you |