you should keep writing you are very good at it hope you finish this fiction some time.

Okay so here's some advice, never give anything to your protagonist easily. Make them strive, if you just give your characters the answers they don't fail and grow. That makes a horribly bad and boring story. Not trying to hate but bro, mito is overpowered. If you showed her failing in some things only to try her hardest to overcome it and then maybe not even overcoming it, that would be great. And I'm only on chapter 1. Hope it gets better.

This is a quite a good story, i have to say. So continue with the good work.

Mito should fight Sakura in the chunin exams.

what is Mito's elemental affinity?

will Mito be a sensory type kunoichi.

Will Mito act just like her mother Kushina.

Mito should be in Team 8.