I like this story, but I'm honestly disgusted that Flynn had sex with Ellos twice, especially that she just met him.

Goid story. To be honest, I'm kind if disappointed that you made Flynn have sex with Ellos in the beginning. It sort of ruined this for me.

Flynn was so... can't think of the word, but she was a solid OC! Seriously, she wasn't one dimensional or anything like that. She blended into Middle Earth seamlessly. Thanks for one hell of a journey, I enjoyed every second!

Fantastic story! I loved it from beginning to end. Your portrayal of the canon characters was on point and a delight to read, and your OCs were endearing as well.

Thank you for sharing!

Truly amazing! ️

This is an excellent story. I love it. I only wish I had a piece of vellum with those magic words so I could go to Middle Earth myself. That would be perfect. Truly. ;)

Present tense for I come in sindarin is telin... So says David Salo, anyway lol...

what labor and devotion to work for years on a story. i feel fortunate to have been able to re-read it in one shot.
I know I have enjoyed it before.
thank you for sharing your talents.
may you continue to enjoy your writing and grow in it.

:)

It was a pleasure to read your story, it was so very well written, I loved the way you described places and your character's emotions.

But, I can't believe Legolas would choose to run and not stay and fight, especially since he is a Prince and has more power than a healer, no matter how good she was. And in his lands...he had soldiers...what happened with them, where were they when their LORD was attacked?!

I don't think the Elders from Lorien would risk a war not only with Legolas's people, but with Thranduil's too...I mean, Flynn is a Lady now, she has a lot more power than a healer...

All this running away because a healer pointed a finger at them ... I really can't see it playing out.

Everything else was wonderful, their love was perfectly paced and even when he was mad at her for keeping her secrets...they were...true to their characters.

The ending was bittersweet since he's now a mortal and he'll die eventually, even with that piece of enchanted paper that prolongs life. I wonder if they'll pass that paper to their kids...I know I would, since my daughter is what matters the most to me and my husband :)

As I said, I love your story and can't wait to read more from you! You are a very good writer! Thank you!

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Fantastic. Original, intriguing, compelling and exciting. Well done, indeed. A new favorite of mine. Thank you for writing and sharing this story. Cheers!

I have longed searched for this wonderful piece of fanfiction. I first came across it on your website but it seems to have been taken down. I an glad to have finally found it on this site even though I loved the original NC-17 version the lovely connections that I as the reader love to see but this edited version is takes nothing away from the overall feels. I still quite enjoy this story. The ending is as all great stories should end; with a new beginning.

Wolfy

I absolutely adored this last part! I enjoyed your story as a whole but this last paragraph did me in. Beautifully done!

Sounds very interging so far I like it... He'll if I saw a little animal with cute little eyes i couldn't kill it lol and i would also throw up too .

One of the most brilliantly written stories I have read. I am sad that this tale is over as it was such a compelling epic and I am completely invested in their love story. Have you written anything else Sommer?