Wait... why didnt Mako and Asami ever get together after Korra's death?

You forgot about the part where Ron Simmons walks past a moping Mako while observing, stopping, then letting out a large verbal DAMN!

too bad mako was so terribly ooc and was some bitter crybaby instead of the selfless supportive friend th

I really like your story, but I need to lay some truth on. So hear it goes, the writing and how there speaking is a little stiff, all the proper makes them sound a little robotic.

Hi. This story was good. The only thing is, Korra never calls Tonraq father. It's always Dad. Other than that, it was good.

it should have bee a three way relationship between them in the show. mako, korra, amd asami. will do that in this story own the line or not. mako got srewed in the series.

(Speak in hight pitch Britich accent) What do you mean 'AU'? This is obviously the deleted scene they cut from the final!
I know you somehow get your sneaky hand on that r original script, but pretended to wrote this as a fanfic, didn't you! DIDN'T YOU!?

Seriously though, I really like the part when the pair arrived in the spirit world, it simple yet feel so beautiful...

This was great I could totally see this happening in a
TV-14 version of the show

lol Im just imagining the look on Mako's face when he saw Korra and Asami at the Spirit Portal. XD priceless