does the word "typical" hold any meaning for ya?

Gah! You can't leave the story like that. Please continue... PLEASE!

Aw man...cliffhanger! And you're not gonna continue this? TnT Well, this is a nice story. I LOVE the Mary & Terry part in chapter 3. So cute! :)

Hey! What happened to your, stay tuned for more? :( *glare*

i'm so glad i decided to look on fanfiction to see if there were any new FF fanfics. This is a great story that i read all the existing chapters in one day and plan to print them out. please keep writing! for someone who says they don't know much about FF or KOF you seem to have a very good grasp on it. until there is another FF OVA/movie or even *dare i dream* a KOF OVA or movie, reading great fanfiction like this is the next best thing! besides Terry is the best. that's why i went to an anime convention as him ;) and i had plenty of people recognise me, even when on the street.
anyways, getting off subject, please continue the story, considering it says your last update was in 2003. please finish what you started! :) just don't think up some crap ending just for the sake of ending it :P

PLEASE UPDATE THIS I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR ETERNITY. YOUR SUCH A GOOD WRITER... YOU GOT ALL THE CHARACTERS PERSONALTY PERFECTLY.. PLEASE. FOR THE LOVE OF GOD AND ALL THAT IS HOLY. UPDATE THIS FIC.. PLEASE... PLEASSEE * ON HER KNEES * PLEASE?

This has to be one of the best Fatal Fury stories I have seen so far... it's kept me on the edge but are you sure it should be in the "R" area? Other than violence and some gore it doesn't really hit it. Please make more chapters and grant me the riviledge of reading more of your work. Send me an e-mail if you want any suggestions, I'll be happy to help you out if necessary. I've played KoF and reads mangas on the Fatal Fury Team, and by far I would love to see this get better. Keep up the good work, ou have a lot of talent and potential. Well I have to get moving.. thanks for the good story so far.. I'm in tears at how good it has been done.

u haven't updated 4-ever! well i really lke your story, it seems like they can make a movie out of it plz update!

you gotta finish this man i need to know what happens next

kick ass story so far

just started reading it then got hooked so deon't leave me hanging

THE SUSPENSE! ok... :D can u update soon? pleas? PLEASE?

UUUUUPPPPPP DDDDAAAATEEEEEE! _

...geese, u take to long

_ good story!

Hey! luv ur fic.. i haven't finished it yet. but i will. i juz wanna ask something. u kno u put king as a guy... i've always thought king was a girl... but that's juz me talking. well keep going! buh bai!

chunny chan

You really like cliff hangers huh?... TOOK YA LONG ENOUGH! but... _ the chapter was awsome! Yes, i hate school too.. awww! I wanna know whut happens! Write more soon ! _

Whoa! That was good. The suspence, the tension and emotions btwn Terry and May! Excellent writing. Keep writing so i can keep reading.

Hey, this story is great, don't listin to the flames, those people are stupid. Can you please update quickly? don't give up on this story! *sigh* I haven't watched the fatal furry 2 movie yet so i hope i dont miss out on much stuff. Sorry for the long review- KEEP WRITING! even if not many people review, this is an awsome story!