Whyyyyyyyyyyyy is this so amazing! Please try to spell better and add proper pronunciation and grammar, though. Otherwise it's amazing!

Cliffhangers...oh how I hate them...I can't wait for the next update! :D

Reading the part that talks about their ADHD I found the actions described fit the ADHD norm (at least to this ADHD teen). However, I think they would be also pacing back and forth so much the onlookers get tired because of how much they're moving. Also going on and on and on and on in conversation.
p.s. I don't mean to stereotype at all. This is just how I feel

I like the premise of this story, but I think you could do better. A lot of the spelling is wrong and maybe try to elaborate on the different plot points so people are less confused.

CONTINUE!,!,!,!,,!.

Voldemort is the name not volde,percy.
sorry talking to the book
think i'm going cukcuk

wow so annabeth is having the same thing happen to her

it is to short comeon they are my fav book make it longer plz!

You forgot Thalia

awesome

You should avoid planes for a bit
You wrote zues instead of Zeus

And I thought that they didn't trust her?
So why did they tell her the greek thing so easily?
Yeah yeah I know
'Everything happens for a reason'
It's still confusing
*sighs*
I give up on understanding you
I WILL WEAR MY CONFUSION WITH PRIDE

My toe hurts
:(
(I broke my toe yesterday)
But that has no relation to this
...
So why am I telling you?
*walks off muttering to myself in confusion*

From here onwards I'm just gonna assume anything that confused me happens for a reason

Also,
You wrote 'kike' a few time when I think you meant 'like'

...
I think you weren't kidding when you told me you were going to be updating a lot
Not that I mind
XD

The chapters are kind of short but I don't think I can really complain about that - I have a story where the chapters are really short to

But I will admit to being even more so fused about the plot now

Harry is in first year right?
So why does he already know Ron and Hermione
It would make sense if they were in a higher year
They also seem to know a lot of stuff that they don't know in first year
And I'm pretty sure they're supposed to take the boats to hogwarts cos they're in first year

Sorry if this seems kind of complainy
I do like your story
I'm just very confused

that is ever funnier than the the last one
again how is percy connected to voldemort
grandfather on mom's side or something