Reviews for Phoenix
nashdragneelbautista77 chapter 3 . 8/27
I don't mind him being with his sisters
hannabannalikeapple222 chapter 14 . 6/13
This is okay I would like to know what happens next though
thegrison chapter 10 . 5/11
It was good but the more I read the less I like it. Your are putting too much in Narutos world when there are a lot of things already. Ease back on things. Too much kills the story.
Ryu wolf chapter 15 . 4/24
I liked this version
thedragonlord5000 chapter 5 . 2/24
Uzushiogakure
Feelinara chapter 2 . 1/12
Luk
Guest chapter 15 . 9/1/2019
Wow
MysticRising chapter 6 . 6/2/2019
Very nice. But i have a few issues with his anger. I totally get him resenting a family that basically ignored him, but not to the point he wants to murder everyone. Canon naruto faced a much worse childhood with physical abuse and constant threats, so I feel his wanting to murder is unjustified. At least he has urges to not murder.
The Phoenix is weird. Like why be in his brain, and I never understood why in some works (be they published or fanfictions) we never get an explanation for why the pheonix species is endangered. Like they can be killed but just resurrect themselves soon after. It should take very special circumstances to result in their near endangerment thanks to permanent death, like a very special power to a actually kill a Phoenix.
Also, i hope you don't mean shipping naruto and kushina or him and his siblings. Cause as much as I am open for ships, incest is not one of those things.
That being said while i don't understand his anger, I do appreciate his character. He does torture people like mitsuki but he has a conscious and doesn't like to do it. He is smart but hides it, and very powerful but again is smart in how he uses it. I do hope naruto finds people he likes, like the father daughter duo from ichiraku. Like garaa. I know, awkward with the shukaku, but garaa was abused and naruto should understand being a pariah, even though garaa was obviously worse he still knows how isolation feels like.
daperbianchicomanda chapter 3 . 3/2/2019
lol why is the kyuubi kind all of a sudden
qalleesyawesome chapter 14 . 1/30/2019
yes you should continue this story. please
CharPunch chapter 14 . 1/2/2019
Humble right?
XenoLucifer chapter 3 . 12/25/2018
Yes Naruto, be surprised that your ability to produce blue fire can kill people, I mean it's not like fire is extremely hot and can burn through human skin easily nor does it produce gasses that are highly dangerous...oh wait. Seriously, you're Naruto is dumber than canon. Wait a few chapter guys, soon Naruto will sprout nonsense like Shirou Emiya from Fate/Stay night, like "people die when they're killed" and "Just because you're right doesn't mean you're correct".
XenoLucifer chapter 2 . 12/25/2018
"Anko finds Naruto secretly training cliché" I'm gonna take a guess here and say Anko will become his teacher or whatever thus making this just like every other fic with Anko in it.
XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 12/25/2018
Oh shit, she dun goofed! stepped into Naruto's room without knocking? death penalty.
marcusmoolenaar chapter 8 . 11/8/2018
Slash the head band
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