I always hate BHy stories where it involve Tadashi being kidnapped, babied, spoiled by the villain and you made Tadashi become a fragile princess which was not cool at all. Ugh! It cringes me whenever I imagine the older one like Tadashi got loved more by the villain while the smaller and cuter one like Hiro was hated and treated like a trash by the villain. You should read 'Bruises', where Callaghan kidnapped Hiro and tried to make him his son. That fits with the story since Hiro was still young to be considered adopted and beside, Hiro was like Abigail.

I guess you're just too delusional and just wanted to make Tadashi to become babied and loved like a child -_- Geez, I am shuddering. That was why you didn't continue this story because this story was based on your fantasy to see whump and kidnapped Tadashi so the story sucks.

it's 2020, THIS IS SO GOOD BRUH I NEED MORE OF THIS!

I need more of this...

Are you ever going to update this fic? It's really good.

Please, please, please update soooon!

Please continue. I know it's been a while.
Please please please please please.

I'm a bit disturbed...but also curious. It's kind of like I'm reading an episode of Criminal Minds. I like it! Please continue, I'll definitely keep reading.

Please! Update! I want to see callghan's assume get kick

Crud, crap, holy shit! So many emotions from this and my heart is still racing!

So, uh, the rest... Where is it?

AJ

Oh, snap. We be in trouble now.

Your writing is amazingly good! The detail you include makes it seem so real! Keep up the awesome work!

Man he's creepy, poor Tadashi, but I really like it! Please update soon!

Cass was probably as level-headed as anyone could get in a situation like that (I’ve always loved her as a “normal person thrown into the Bizarre”, and she’s been great as that here), considering she’s only known about all of this for… several hours now? And then that brief moment of trying to navigate Callaghan’s madness, only for Tadashi to do what amounts to throwing a Hail Mary… they’ve really got their work cut out for them even just surviving the night.

Seeing how that’ll all play out, especially with Krei (possibly) out of the picture… for now at least, well, I hope we get to see it soon!

(sorry for delayed and shorter review. I spoke to soon about my computer issues. the harddrive randomly decided to stop existing, so that's fun. silly thing's only 6 months old. as this is the 14th harddrive error/wipe/etc in the last four years spanning three brands of computer, I think I'm just cursed.)

OH MY GOSH THE CRAP HOLY CRAP ARYHVYGONUORYCEE%$A$&XX.

beautiful. Terrifying. Oh gosh the poor Hamada fam. They need hugs and therapy and safety, /stat/, and Callaghan really deserves to get set on fire, oh my gosh, that was so heart-shudderingly evil. my skin is crawling. He was gonna kill Aunt Cass! gah! I'm so afraid. like, I feel vaguely confidant enough that this will have at least a somewhat happy ending, just from your other stories, but I'm not confidant enough and also I feel like I know your writing well enough that things do not go right until the last second and now I'm just rambling because I'm afraid for the babies oh my gosh oh babies.

yay! Save Abby. maybe /she/ can talk some sense into Father dearest...heh. that was a super clever plan. and, even if they can't get Abby, because they don't know she's alive, it get's Cass out of immediate danger and puts her in place to find the tracker...so that's good. I wonder how spectacularly /that/ will backfire. (because I'm not betting a copper that it'll go smooth.)

can't wait to see more! have a great day!