| Reviews for The Emerald Terror |
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Mamy 83 chapter 14 . 6/6 Pourquoi les meilleures histoires ne sont jamais terminées, c'est assez frustrant de se dire qu'on ne connaîtra probablement jamais la fin. Dommage |
Meg-Helix chapter 14 . 12/2/2019 Fantastic story. It's a pity, that there is not more chapters. I hope you still write and that you will add something soon. Blessed be. M.-H. |
Camille.Ad0 chapter 14 . 6/11/2019 Nice story thought weird some times but I supose it is your style. ) |
terinitodoritokimi chapter 14 . 5/17/2019 Sooooooo, I'm guessing you won't update again? |
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 14 . 8/16/2018 Shame there aren't more chapters. |
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 13 . 8/16/2018 Why on earth would this Tom remember Harry's past? He hasn't actually been in Harry going by Heath's mind and he hasn't experienced the life Harry used to know him as. On top of that the soul piece that had existed in Harry's head for almost 2 decades does not exist and cannot exist as it was now part of Tom still so he can't have the memories that way. If its supposed to be through the bond they have as husbands that won't work either as you've already explained that Tom is unaffected by it for various reasons and since he rejected the relationship he shouldn't have access to the other's mind for anything. Also is what Harry is suffering with the blood coughing the same thing Hermione went through? Or was her ailment different? |
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 12 . 8/16/2018 I don't understand why he hasn't attempted to do ANYTHING to promote better muggle protection and isolation with the amount of time he has before hand to stop the witch hunt happening. I mean sure he wants the people he knew to still be born but he doesn't have to DO anything to their families just communicate with magical governments and other magical beings and whatever. Surely his old family name has political ties. Surely the potter heir who liked him would be a good ally. Surely he could have continued to do shit behind the scenes to discredit Dumbledore and ruin his image like he initially wanted to do. But he does nothing. For about 20 years he does nothing but sass customers who insult him in his shop. Is he even amassing a large fortune off of these people? Charging them highly the richer they are or the more they insult him by tripling the cost or more? What is his end game with that shop? Has he even recreated or created potions from his time to aid with the coming witch hunts? And just how incompetent is Tom that he forgets that he wanted to speak to Heath and never looked for him? 20 fuck years and he forgets two people he wants to know about, one of whom gave everybody the slip. How?! Dispute my questions this is enjoyable. |
Gurgaraneth chapter 14 . 8/17/2017 Hpe harry can still talk to snakes nd tom shuld have visions of harrys life both well tom is awake nd asleep it b intrestin to see the horrors of the witch hunt nd wot harry ment by green nd wen he droped his name nd took up Emerald Terror |
Gurgaraneth chapter 1 . 8/14/2017 Update plz want to see tom have dreams of harrys memorys nd see how he handles harry having nightmares |
Z chapter 14 . 3/24/2017 I really like this, but your last few chapters are beginning very short and very confusing to follow |
MargaritaS chapter 14 . 3/16/2017 i wish there was more :) |
Mojo the big jojo chapter 14 . 12/27/2016 Hello The begining of your story is very interesting. i love the idea of a with hunt and how destroyed is Harry when he arrived in this time. I think it a good change that the story doesn't occur in Hogwart but after. It is so sad that the story seems to be abandoned. But I keep hope and I will follow you and wait for a next update. Thanks for this story and good luck. (Sorry if everything it's not understanble but I'm French). |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/9/2016 In 1944 barcodes had not been invented. lasers and computers are needed to read them and at that time computers were wires and valves and clockwork (cracking the enigma code at Bletchley Park, England). |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2016 Please update. |
Rebecca chapter 14 . 9/13/2016 I know its been a while since you've updated but please! this story is so good! I need more so please please update? XD |