RIP, I would like to thank you for putting your ideas down for us to experience. I know you helped me after my Dad died and I was looking for a escape, you updated Poker Knight the next day and I was able to smile a little through my tears. Who knows maybe the Japanese have something right and your starting to build your Isekai Harem right now. May your stories enrich and enhance others for years to come..

This looks like the start of a really good story.
I hope your muse eventually agrees.
Keep writing
J'hn1

all the original villain getting offending at the skill level's of their foe's successor? I love it

I almost feel sorry for that vendor; an Akimichi now knows that they violated the sanctity of ice cream

You've mixed up amused and bemused. Bemused means to be mildly confused, rather than amused

very good

This was excellent. I'm unused to seeing writers other than myself express reasonably sound philosophy,
-LordsFire.

interesting character study, people get so focused on the heroes that they forget the ones who made them who they are

good gamer fics are reliant on comedy, try to keep that in mind if you continue this

revans a character with a lot of potential, and you write the banter with trask well enough to make me sympathize with the boring tutorial character

of course with naruto's luck everyone else will end up broke

Very good work

cool. 10/10 would read more of this.

This is fantastic! I'm really hoping that you'll take this chapter idea and run with it. It's looking even more hilarious than the original story this spawned from. Your character portrayals for this set are absolutely fantastic and I'm really hoping to see more of them.

An interesting way of looking at things here, Chilord. Pity you didn't include Billy Batson's father and how he would reflect on being Captain Marvel/Shazam.