SPOILER ALERT FOR PEOPLE ABOUT TO READ THE STORY, PLEASE DON'T READ MY REVIEW

So I'm normally rather leery of stories with human enters book universe stories, but this worked well. I'm just very cheesed off with you for offing Kili, because what's the point of introducing other character if you can't save people by the wayside? thorin doesn't count, that was rather the point of the story. I adored Tauriel in the film, and was just as heartbroken as she was.

Okay. So I planned to just stop reading this, but I figured I might as well leave a comment on the way. First of all, I would like to give you props for having good writing. Regardless of my thoughts on your choices within the story, I can admit that you write well. However, with this in mind I must say that many of the choices in the plot are too obvious and overused. You rely too much on cliches and it weakens the characters you are crafting. I'll leave it at that. I realize you wrote it forever ago, and I am positive your skillset has only grown since then. Maybe I'll check out some of your other work.

Thanks for this wonderful story.

*cheers and cackles madly*

Gemma is my hero

I'm tempted to offer you my first born for ansequel but I need to see how this ends first.

I'm cracking up this is the best

Decent spelling AND grammar? *Swoons*

I'm in love! Gemma seems like a sassy brat and I love it.

Awesome!does anyone know any good fics about girl falling into middle earth pairing-Thorin x oc?

"Hey jackass!
As soon as the Company found shelter in a tiny and thankfully uninhabited cave, Gemma accosted Thorin.”
What I love about this sentence is it implies the dwarves were all hiding from Gemma's anger.

Wow. Amazing! Would highly recommend to virtually anyone looking for a story that doesn't mind a little cussing! ;) We'll done my friend. Onto the sequel with haste!

I dearly love this story and your character. Reminds me of me and my sister's OC, a little Dwarf/Elf hybrid named Mithra. She's sassy and not afraid to let it show.

I hate you and I love you. WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME?! I HAVEN'T CRIED AT THE END OF A STORY LIKE THIS IN FOREVER!

Hey, I totally loved this story & read it in like 2 days pulling late nights to read the whole thing, already read the sequel, will leave separate review there.