| Reviews for You're not alone |
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Jane L. Black chapter 6 . 9/30/2018 OMG. This last scene was so beautiful, I cried. |
Illaengka chapter 15 . 4/5/2016 This is beautiful. I'm not always a fan of Raven, and if it is Raven vs. Murphy I Will side with Murphy every single time. Putting the two of them together isn't something I would ever have come up with, but you made it work and you did it without making them seem out of character. Great progression throughout with appropriately subtle changes without dragging. A truely fantastic story. Thank you for writing! |
minstorai chapter 10 . 7/25/2015 This was so flawless! |
minstorai chapter 8 . 7/25/2015 Lmfao "decided to go ahead and prove their love to one another," that was hilarious, and this chapter was even sweeter and more entertaining than the last one! |
minstorai chapter 7 . 7/25/2015 Oh dude, I love how you write them and their dynamic! The space heater-boar trade was the best thing ever! Oh and yeah, I like Wick and Raven too, I like Raven with just about anybody (but Clarke or Finn), and I do like where Murphy's at now but it's a shame his story veered away so much (on the show) cause he and Raven had some potential |
Tefnout chapter 15 . 5/18/2015 This fanfiction was so good! I read the 15 chapters straight away, because I just could not stop. So LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY FEELS! because I think it is always better when the reader says exactly what made them like the author's work: first off I loved how you wrote Raven and Murphy. Sure, John is nicer than what we've seen of him in most episodes of the show but that is not what you can call being OOC, because you showed the gradual change of his behaviour and how acceptance and friendship helped him getting rid of all his anger and all his frustration. He only needed a true friend to help him being a better person, and a better person he became thanks to Raven. I love how you made their relationship and all the relationships in your story evolve slowly, how you let the characters breathe and have doubts. I think that the part where you nailed it is the Clarke/Raven confrontation. You turned a difficult relationship into a strong female interaction. They easily could have teared each other apart but no, you wrote a powerful scene where they let it all out, with tears. The importance of personal thoughts and grief is very visible in your story and that's what I like about it. It's not just a romance story. It's a story about moving on, about getting over something traumatic: the loss of the person you thought was the love of your life. And it's a story about second chances and acceptance. Murphy is showed as human, he changes, he laughs and his daily interactions with Raven give him multiple dimensions. Congrats, it was a great fic! I hope I'll read more from you in the future! |
somanychrises chapter 15 . 3/19/2015 Woww that was amazing! Your writing is so beautiful! Please write more of the 100 fanfics. everything in th's was perfect— raven&murphy, Bellamy&Murphy's bromance, Bellamy&clarke, Octavia&Lincoln. AHHHH FEELS |
potterfan310 chapter 15 . 3/18/2015 I'm sad this is the last chapter, but the chapter itself makes me super happy! :D These two oh god, I ship them so, so bad. All the little things he does for her, too cute! Raven sleeping in his t-shirt whilst he was gone My heart Yes! Another Murven story I can't wait :D -Sophie |
potterfan310 chapter 14 . 3/18/2015 Aww the scarf! YES! Murphy teasing Bellamy about Clarke and Raven, I LOVE it! Jasper, bless him for being concerned. Of course Raven would kill him first, I would really not to like to imagine their break up XD Octavia and Raven's friendship I need more, asap! Now that is going to be an interesting conversation for sure. "Welcome home," - oh god the feels. Murven smut Aww this chapter man, I'm so happy they said I love you, it's been a long time coming. Oooh yes Murven modern AU I CAN'T WAIT! |
Wolf9lucky chapter 15 . 3/15/2015 Rock on! That was a great story! |
mushsroomsandcucumbers chapter 15 . 3/15/2015 I've really loved this story :) Thank you so much :) |
Mercenary63 chapter 15 . 3/15/2015 Thank you for this truly awesome story! Glad you have a tumblr now, I'm ringmybellarke there in case I ever message you on tumblr and not here. Already excited about your new story! |
gypsypearl77 chapter 15 . 3/15/2015 Awe ... I love the promise of moving forward and letting go. That murphy wants all of her heart and knows she has to let Finn go for that to happen. Beautiful ending to a great story! Loved it! |
LadyJessYU chapter 15 . 3/15/2015 Thanks for this amazing story :) |
Guest chapter 14 . 3/12/2015 Great story. Murven modern au sounds like something I really need. |