| Reviews for The Movement You Need |
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ndpricha chapter 7 . 7/29 This is probably my 8th time re-reading it and it's still as good as the first time. I guess it's safe to say that (most unfortunately) you won't be updating this story anymore, but I hope you know that I enjoy every second of reading this and I have no regret. Wish you the best on all your future endeavors! |
aya0602003188 chapter 7 . 7/3 Please complete it is a wonderful crump |
JustDusty chapter 7 . 6/22 Dear god this torture is finally over |
JustDusty chapter 4 . 6/22 How the heck do you find the patience to find the patience to write an MC like this? i'm trying really hard not to rip my hair off right now. especially when he makes a mistake and then takes the moral high ground. Also considering he's had a mask on for 12 years he's pretty fucking terrible at hiding his emotions. |
ndpricha chapter 1 . 5/4 boy do i hate getting invested in a story that hasn't been updated in half a decade |
Savvywolf chapter 7 . 8/24/2018 And I finally reached the end of your posted chapters. What a thrill! I've been loving this story so much. The ending of this chapter with Minato reminiscing about Kushina was so good I felt my heart go out to them all. I do think that by this point Sakura should have a bit more thoughtfulness and patience as she was doing better by this point in cannon, but I'm still so excited to see where you're going. Anyways, if this is the end then I thank you for putting your story out there! If you do ever decide to come back just know that I'll be there rooting for you! Thanks! |
Savvywolf chapter 6 . 8/23/2018 Yay for training! Gen all the way! and OT3 if not! They are all my favorites. I think the think I liked most in this chapter was both Minato and Naruto worrying about being clingy when in reality... well it's good to know that they have each other. I also laughed out loud at Kurama's "So much drama." Like he didn't just threaten to eat Naruto the hypocrite! Thanks again for the story! |
Savvywolf chapter 5 . 8/21/2018 Oh it's always such a joy to finish a chapter! I've had to go through your story slowly since I only have free time in the evenings, but I'm just enjoying it so much! I'm glad Naruto and Minato are looking towards the future with his training but I also wonder what they are going to prepare for specifically for the Exams. With how important they are there should probably be some prep specifically for them. I forgot to mention this last chapter but Hinata's fight was amazing! I can't wait to see the repercussions it had on Garaa, pain isn't something he deals with often! Also Kurenai Sensei's words could have and impact! Once again I'm loving this story and I'll be back tomorrow for the next couple of chapters! |
Savvywolf chapter 4 . 8/21/2018 I'm loving this! The prelims are always so interesting, and I actually loved Sakura vs Chouji's match, it was easy for me to visualize which was nice! I think my favorite part of this chapter was Kakashi's reminiscing on the fact that the whole emotional connection thing could be a good thing. Sasuke for empathy and understanding, Sakura for depth and reality, and Naruto for connection and learning. It's so cool to feel and see how things are progressing! |
Savvywolf chapter 3 . 8/20/2018 YES let the confusion of everyone else begin! Kakashi, the Hokage, Orochimaru, Kabuto, they are all going to be scratching their heads totally lost. I'm so excited! I think my favorite part in this chapter was Sakura realizing her words could hurt Naruto. Fantastic! All of it! |
Savvywolf chapter 2 . 8/20/2018 HAHAHA! Oh poor team seven, so confused but getting forced to walk a mile in each others shoes will probably do wonders for them in the long run! And Minato banging his head on the floor was fabulous! This is all so exciting! I think my favorite part this chapter was blushing Sasuke! HA! |
Savvywolf chapter 1 . 8/20/2018 You should know that I made so many incomprehensible noises while reading this chapter! It was so good! NARUTO! MINATO! How exciting for both of them! Oh and when Minato sealed the curse seal I just about jumped up and started yelling HA! at Orochimaru! Serves him right! No Uchiha for you! This first chapter has been so fun! I can't wait to keep reading! |
13-BlackCat-2020 chapter 7 . 4/21/2018 This story os really good! I love the plot and the idea of the of team 7 sharing their feelings. I keep wondering how Sakura and Sasuke will react when they learn of the nine tails. I hope you continue to update. :) |
Yorush chapter 7 . 4/7/2018 I surely hope that you'll decide to continue this story eventually, it's a very well written one. Just some points about this chapter - the name of the head of the Hyuga clan is Hiashi, not Hisashi. Also, it's very weird for Minato to suddenly call his own son "Naruto-kun" and then just as suddenly to drop the suffix. Also, why would Naruto think that the anger came from Sasuke? You even wrote before that when he got any emotions from Sakura, it would usually be an anger. Or can he differentiate which emotion is coming from whom? Because you weren't very clear about that. Or, if the "I think that Sakura-chan is really angry at someone" was supposed to be the scene with Kakashi then it sort of doesn't fit with the fact that Kakashi is meeting Naruto and Sakura on different days and just moments before he was with Naruto. Now that I think of it, the whole chapter seems to be set in the span of one day so why is Kakashi suddenly meeting them on the same day? |
merrilyme chapter 1 . 3/15/2018 Interesting and original plot, and really really well written! All it's missing is an update! ;) ... please? you know how hard it is to find an original plot on here? :''( (attempts guilt trip) Hopefully your muse comes back around to bite you :) |