This is good work. A shame it isn't finished.

This is starting to become one of those ever escalating dick measuring contests filled with grunts and overhyped tension like on Dragonball Z. Why would one battle need to last this many chapters?

I am both extremely disappointed and ecstatic at the same time. That was a super plot twist and I liked it

Good. Very good

Very good story!

still sad this hasn't updated...

When i noticed this was the final chapter and this hasn't been updated in years i cried NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

hahaha nice Gene Ray cameo, I only caught that rereading it now. Time cube ftw!

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Very good premise, very good writing... Sad that it hasn't updated in three years.

baby bonesaw! hoping jack doesnt ruin her like in canon... shes so cute in this chapter you really just feel sorry for the kid because she hasnt turned into a total monster

HOLY SHIT did not see that coming.. even though i
should have. absolutely brilliant

diabolical, even on yet another reread

He's like a kid in the candy shop.

I can’t tell you how sad I am that this story cuts of where it does. I hardly expected a finished piece given 29 chapters, a stop in 2015 and the similarity of writing style to Worm, but it’s so hard to have seen so little of our insect-controlling heroine and especially how they dealt with the danger of Noelle. This is fascinating and holds wonderful insight into Jack’s character, though. Well worth it, even if that terrible timer has been stepped up and everybody is clueless as to how.