AHHHH! This was so beautiful! The second I saw the gun and tarot cards, I internally screamed! For a second there, I thought Erica would summon her Persona. I liked how you played with Erica's psyche. It's great to know more about Erica's past. What kind of life did she go through!? And you can see how much she second guess Markata's question about Lion-O. Now that Pumyra is out of the way (I think), it's time for Erica and Lion-O to talk. Like, Talk Talk.
AH! I can't wait to see more in ROOTA!

[Next time he'd probably cement her ass to the floor with his brain.] LMAO. Best. Line. Ever.

[They could play this game all day until the gun's AI system decided to pull that one bullet from subspace.] I really love this because it's so simple. I wasn't positive before, when he explained that the gun was loaded, what he meant by the variable - but this line CLEARLY explains it to me.

So sad. So broken, so strong. It's too much for one woman to handle without someone else in her head. *hugs Erica*

~ Anne

Damn ... That was intense. I knew you wouldn't let Erica die, but the way Markata was playing with her head and how she was this close to ending her life made me worry. Is it just me or does he need her for more than this war? The reason I ask this is because I've been getting the feeling that Markata cares for Erica in more ways than one, like he might actually love her. So, maybe one of the reasons he urges her to answer that last question is because he wants to make sure Lion-O doesn't come between their cause, and more importantly THEM. However, that could just be me. Anyway, please update soon :)

Markata/Mumm-Ra truly knows how to get inside Erica's head, doesn't he? I think he succeeds in just that. And once again, Erica's character is spot on. It's painfully obvious that she's torn between killing Lion-O and forgiving him for what he did to her. Everyone has their own way of telling a story, and you, WAR, know how to tell a story. I'm looking forward to whenever you update "Rise Out of the Ashes," because you're doing a great job of pulling at heartstrings with that fic. :)

It's kind of disturbing how Erica smiles when in war. Even with the Thundercats, she smiles. Just who is Erica Riley? And Markata and Panthro better step off. I still ship Erica and Lion-O!

This was a very interesting story. I never would've thought of pairing Panthro and Echo together, but somehow it works. Although, I'm a secret shipper for Markata/Erica. There's just something about them that I find strangely appealing. Anyway, I'm glad you're back (For the moment, anyway.) and I hope to see more of your awesome writing.

Oh. My. God.

My. GOD.

WAR. This . . . is gorgeous. Not just beautiful, but eye-opening, mind-numbing gorgeous. You're right, I didn't expect how this played out - not Markata's presence, or his parallel with Panthro, or to see Erica/Echo in quite that context, as a teenager who smiles through war. I think you showed me how it's done! X3

I love this so much! *dies*

~ Anne

Ooh. This was so...*struggles for words* It was good. Very good. The parallels were beautiful. The descriptions of Erica and Echo were...haunting? Eerie? But peaceful and very pretty.

What a brilliant prompt here. You completely nail the character of Echo like always because, well, she's your character. There's no need to write your main story if you don't feel inspired - just take as much time as you can to regain your inspiration. After all, imagination is key. :)

Wow, that was amazing! You portrayed Felli-O beautifully! I love how Felline was able to break away from her tormentors and showed them what it means to be a true ThunderCat. I was beyond happy when she did because someone needed to put that girl in her place. God, I hate people like that; they have no fucking respect. Oh, and when Lion-O came running to her rescue, twice, I couldn't help but squeal. Damn it! Why can't more guys be like him!?

WAI! You posted, you posted!

I can't even tell you how excited I am about this. I'm reading it all over again just to savor how AWESOME it is. "Snowfall" is the first ever fic someone has written for me and I'm so super hyper I can't stop dancing around. LOL. I feel so - so honored and priveleged and special. X3 But now, on to the real review:

For an AU, it's not too far off base. I was really impressed how you managed to present a younger Felline that I could logically see growing into the one that I introduced. Lepra and Snow, too, even though they don't have any screen time, are spot on, and their family dynamic is as sad as ever. And then she has those girls picking on her! For good reason (sort of), since it's true that she is second class and SHOULDN'T have been elevated to living in the palace if birth was the only factor.

I don't know why, but the presence of the lioness just made the whole scene. I could imagine how beautiful she must be.

I both love how Felline (passive-aggressive princess she is) let herself get pushed into a corner before fighting back . . . and when it was over and she'd lost, she ran off to cry. That is so like her! I actually cheered a little that she DID stand up for herself. :3

The setting of snow, I thought, was beautifully done. To me, it represents how Felline feels inside - isolated and unloved, but even she knows that there's potential for beauty. And for Lion-O to come so far for her . . . !

Seriously, can you hear the fangirl squealing? IT'S SO ROMANTIC!

I noticed the scents you put in there. Nice. X3

Yup, I am so beyond in love with this. Thank you.
Anne

This is, like, totally rad! You've done justice to frankannestein's Felline character, and Lion-O as well. His desire to be there for others, even the cats, speaks volumes. I appreciate how you've had him rescue Felline from danger *and* herself. No doubt you'll do more o' these when you're able.

Anne is gonna love this WAR. I love this. It's so accurate about what (a more present-day) Lion-O would do. I don't blame Felline for slapping the lioness (good thing it wasn't Leana?). Some lions and lionesses just need to get slapped.