yeah. CLASSIC.

stockholm syndrome...

Good story.

(sniffles slightly)

(bursts into tears)

NO! NO! NO!

NO!

Yeah so much for studying indeed lol :D Should have seen that coming though Christine ;) Loved the chapter so much :) Sad the story is over :(

Hahahahahahahaha! That's so cute! :D

Oh yeah I remember her mentioning how Erik was a strict piano teacher. But him being her private tutor? *dies from exhaustion*

for a 13 year old you have written an ensightful story. there is alot of action between all the characters right till the end. I loved the way erics mom appeared in this. You were wise not to have sex in the story because of your age, but you were able to express great love with your characters. I think you should definately keep writing.
The self story at the end about your childhood friend alma was also heartwarming and a great tribute to her and the love you felt for her. I am not sure what your parents do for a living or what foreign country they are from but you sadly seem left on your on. As upset as you were and still are about Almas departure could they not contact her so you could write to her. In all the years you were together did you not find out anything about where she came from that yyywould aid you in finding her again as a pen pal. if you ever want to just talk my name is paaula and my phone is 704 508 1141 . I live in north carolina, usa. I am an old lady, a former teacher and I have enjoyed your story very very much. You have great promise.

I have been to the actual Opera House in Paris and they talked about the story of the Phantom there :) Rather than the whole chandelier falling it was a part of it killing a woman. Also sorry to disappoint you Phans out there but Box five isn't the best box to have; not sure why the Phantom in the story had such an obsession but who knows? The reason why it isn't the best box to sit in is because there isn't really the best view from there at all :/ But they talked a lot about strange goings on at the opera house caused by a mysterious 'phantom'. Very interesting place to go to and hear the truth behind the legend we all know and love :) Well worth a visit :) I knew about who wrote it even though the writer is French and the story is originally French; surprisingly they don't really know about the story very much :)

"Eric, he's passed away." The ground shook from the sound of a million phangirls fainting.

I'm sorry but this is bugging me:
It's Erik not Eric. You do that every chapter and it bugs me.

I might've said this before might've not but I am absolutely amazed by ur writing at your age like ok I'm only a little bit of older than u but still. The whole raoul thing and then Eric getting stabbed brought me to hysterics. So much bawling occurred and u were the one who made it happen. That takes talent so whatever I might not be the best person to judge, other people may or may not agree, but I love ur story and I was super excited to finally see the update after the Eric's mom cliffhanger. I truly hope u keep writing.

Loved the story