Gotton to read this and it was A awsome read! Best way to do MAss Effect 1 ta boot

These recent chapters are really starting to annoy me too many inconsistencies and Shepard going full Retard

Ok your Shepard is less renegade and more psychopath at this point you know that right?

And now you've done it *sighs* What is up with authors putting stupid fucking controlling scheming bullshit A.I.s into their super soldiers. Now all I'm gonna do is worry about when that A.I. is gonna lock up his suit in mid combat for not following protocol/orders

Uh that was a hell of a leap of logic by Saren "oh you have advanced technology obviously you are from another galaxy/universe" Why the fuck does using slugs and having crazy good armor equate to "not from around here"

the "logical" voice in my head says "they can still fix this" while the pissed off one says they should just "get rid of Shepard" before she fucks up the Galaxy anymore than it already is

Well now you've got me wanting Nathan to put down Shepard like the rabid dog that she is, Filthy renegade.

Why is everyone so fucking angry in this Fic lol. Well...at least a few of them have their heads on straight I.E. the MCs and Tali.

Thanks Eclipse-sol for another awesome chapter. I'm curious to see how things will turn out now that the events of the first game are now over and Nilus is still alive and kicking. Good luck with your next chapter and as always have fun writing.

I hope conner gets the AI to boost his immune system.

I like ot

I really hope theres a update for this its been a great ride so far!

I ment "fic" of course. Stupid autocorrect.

I hope this finds is not dead, because I really enjoyed it.

Good chapter. Good in length, some of the other crew got some lines in and Joker was his funny self. You know with this story winding down I'm curious how you guys are going to handle Connor. Nathan is set after this being in the military, but Conner is glaringly obviously going to have a hard time after this. He has no background on any of the Quarian ships and no captain will recognize him. He can't say he was in exile due to Quarian records would have something on that and I doubt Tali will let him adventure on his own. She will want to drag him back to the fleet. You guys have your work cut out for you two regarding that.