| Reviews for Maelstrom, The Eccentric Sage |
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   reaver216 chapter 11 . 4/2 This is awesome I don't see why you haven't updated yet but I hope you're working on one as I can't wait to find out what happens next |
| Witty Banter chapter 1 . 10/2/2017 I call bullshit on Naruto possessing Minato's calm nature. Intelligence... debatable, but calm? Not a chance in hell. |
| R chapter 10 . 8/14/2017 Narutos affinities... were just awful. You gave hin earth and water, and you diminished his wind affinity. LAME |
| Bosma19 chapter 11 . 6/2/2017 Please update I love this chapter and how you have made team 7 stronger but still believable |
| Shodaime Gahokage chapter 4 . 5/19/2017 If I was not clear in the last comment that was a congratulation on avoiding an error many make. |
| Shodaime Gahokage chapter 3 . 5/19/2017 I see one error of interpretation very ofthen in Naruto fanfictions. In a serious fight the ninja will not say the name of the technique out loud. The time the chunin exam roll in Naruto does not call his techniques outside his mind anymore. The TV serie decided to have the actors say them but in universe there's only the effect. Any ninja not knowing Naruto seeing the sexy jutsu just think it's the henge applied in a perverted way. |
| Monster King chapter 11 . 5/12/2017 Great story I really liked it can't wait until the next update. |
| arinasution5 chapter 11 . 2/26/2017 H |
| Faery66 chapter 11 . 1/11/2017 Hope to read more soon. D. |
| Zanzar chapter 11 . 9/29/2016 What happens next and when is the next chapter? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2016 Why doesnt Itachi's Crow talk? its summon right? if its not why would he have a random crow watching the kid? |
| Oddballzebra chapter 11 . 7/7/2016 Does he really need wood release? He has so much already, giving him the First's power is just overkill. Why is Sakura suddenly becoming strong? Is there even a point to that? Also are they going to be ok with killing, cause they are mercenary ninja's so killing should really be second nature to them. |
| Oddballzebra chapter 8 . 7/5/2016 overkill |
| Oddballzebra chapter 3 . 7/1/2016 1. Isn't it just 12 guardian ninjas? Not ninja monks. 2. A hundred thousand clones is WAY too much even for Naruto. 3. Why was he wearing socks with ninja sandals when going to the palace? |
| Blaze501st chapter 5 . 6/28/2016 if flames are being used for usefull things...then why wouldnt i give you flames...ok...this is the 1st time that i have done this...so i might be pretty bad at it...but here i go...YOU SUCK...uhhhh...THIS STORY SUCKS...ummmmmmmmmmm...I HAD INTERCOURSE WITH YOUR PLANT LAST NIGHT!...there you go...have fun with the flames and enjoy the chicken |
