Oh. Wow. Poor, poor Jim. Poor Jimmy Boy. Well' more please!

Omg this story is adorable!
It's very true, they would be nervous dorks after that kiss... I was. (._.) Yep... I admit!
I seriously love this story to pieces though! I am always nervous and awkward with both Bioware and RL relationships at first, so I relate to your writings well. lol. XD
I'm really looking forward to another Chapter should it come up one day. _

Amazing work on chapter 2 as well.

amazing work.

Please write a story about their date. :)

D'awwwww
This was adorable, and remarkably well written. Kudos to you, mate.
One small quibble: it didn't need to be rated M, just T because there's no swearing or illicit content. This isn't te sort of thing that would offend anybody, so don't worry with the higher rankings

Adorable! Makes me love him even more! Keep up the awesome work!

This story made me so happy! I love the fluff, it's so beautiful! Great job!

Omg! XD This is so cute, so in character, and lol, that smirk of Cullen will get him in trouble some day xD Please write more! 3