Reviews for dive into a shallow pool
robotsaresuperscary chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
This was wonderful. Very artsy.
dressed-in-white-satin chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
This was emotional. Really well done.
BifurcatingArborescence chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Stunning. Well-written and an interesting concept at that.
FanfictionVillainess chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Very well written.
Streetlight Eyes chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
This was wonderful
ThisUnitHasNoSoul chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
This was poetic, artistic and IC. Loved it.
splendorousfire chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Beautiful. I loved it. Even though the ending was sad.
SquishyBijou chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
This was a beautiful portrayal of their relationship. It told a thousand stories in very few words.
Distracted by Lemons chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
This was so sad, but also really sweet. I like to imagine that their wish comes true even though the ending is so bleak.
electric gurrl chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
This was extremely emotional. It really captured Tyzula perfectly.
dickard23 chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
short and bittersweet. Well done