This hit me right in the fells. Straight to my kokoro. Damn. I wished this has happened at the movie!

This story is awesome. You really captured the relationship between Harry and Peter really well. I mean, really well. I loved it.

I love the little bits that go back to the past. -Cat.

I liked all the flashbacks included in the story, they really added to the plot. Great fanfic.

I love your style. It was trully very well written.

This fic was simply amazing! :D it definitely fits as the one-shot it is, it probably would have been disjointed a bit at times if it were split into chapters.

I feel like the kissing was a bit rushed, however. Like as if there's no reason for it at all, except at the part where Peter cures Harry. Perhaps you should have stuck with the hints, as major as they were, sometimes not directly stating something can make that thing even stronger than just putting it out there.

On another note, I liked how you portrayed there past, and how you tied the past events into the future. It was also very well written, taking advantage of the dash symbol, and the semicolon, I really do appreciate that kind of stuff, shame I can't really do it in my own fics.

All in all, it was a very good fanfic, in fact one of the best I've read, I just feel the Parksborn could have been toned down a bit more.

(omg I'm so sorry this is so long, I didn't mean for it to be lol) Glasses