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![]() ![]() ![]() Door to hot buttered popcorn! Damn, Clarivoiant! Don't make me come find you! DOOR TO HOT BUTTERED POPCORN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was the best chapter of worm ive ever read, so many timelines so little time. So if i enjoyed it or was super confused? The answer is 'yes' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just... damn it coil... |
![]() ![]() ![]() YESSS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MWAHAHAHA x9000! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MWAHAHAHA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This becomes a running gag by now. And this is the first fanfic I see this running gag to begin with. MWAHAHAHA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh fuck |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im 20% sure Lung was aroused by that fight. ...this thought scares me |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm can't help but think missed a joke at the end. Gamers not talking about how "the cake is a lie"? For shame |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well one part of this chapter that really odd no one brought up, the so called "Unwritten rules". Using knowledge of Taylor's identity to instantly connect a crime to her house and attempt to arrest her there... is pretty shaky ground. Especially for some one with such a clean record as Taylor so far. I mean mass murders in Worm don't get that kind of treatment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait for the last chapter, wherin Taylor encounters Heartbreaker and then both. live happily ever after. |
![]() ![]() Taylor is being a real snowflake. |
![]() ![]() "Holy shit. She finished it, and the Simurgh's determined not to let her keep it." Why would the Simurgh have to wait until Taylor finished it? Pretty obvious plot armor IMO. The Simurgh is a precog that can see pretty far into the future, not a right-now-cog ;-) |
![]() ![]() Seems a bit off to have paranoia and cautioness as a skill, it's more of a mental state |