Golly gee that was tough for them.

I think you did an amazing job with Killian's perspective! I can understand why he felt guilty and felt like he was burdening Emma. The conversation with David was really heartfelt. It really helped put things in perspective for him.

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This was very very good. Thank you for coming back to it. I think you wrote Killian, the centuries old pirate from another realm, trying to conceive a child via IVF, perfectly. He thought the procedures were ‘malevolent’ and had to rationalize the end would justify the means. He felt ‘extraneous’ because Emma was suffering all the modern medicines while he was down the hall with a specimen cup. It was heartbreaking when the procedure didn’t work and it was okay when Emma said she needed to be alone. It led Killian to David who was very helpful and gave Killian the opportunity to share what was on his mind. I had laughed at the eager beaver label previously but when he finally talked to David David did understand and was hopeful.

Thank you again, this was lovely.

That was sweet

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Killian's sentiment for the memories of their wedding is sweet and loving. It was so nice to see him enjoying reliving the moment. This was very good, thanks for continuing his adventures!

Very sweet! I love that Killian wanted them to have a re-do without the rush of the impending curse.

But did they sing this time?

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I really enjoyed this! I've read other "testing" stories, but yours was from such a unique perspective. It would make sense that Killian's swimmers might have some issues after how long he's lived. And, who knows what dying and coming back to life does to your fertility.

I would love to see another part to this to see if they actually try to make a baby. Extremely interested. This is so good and I think that it would be great to see if there was more to it. It's up to you though.

Loved it!

It is so fascinating to hear what inspires stories and then see what you make of it. It makes a lot of sense that Killian's soldiers have been through a lot, as he has and have been affected.

Oh please continue the testing one that's was way too funny and awsome I loved it