Reviews for True Lightning
Hurlstien chapter 2 . 8/10/2019
Looking good so far! You're grammar and writing style are on point, it's a pleasure to read.
Maiko seems like an interesting character, I'm looking forward to learning more about her background, and whether or not she knows Kisame (a fave of mine).
Thank you for writing!
treesofsilverleaves chapter 6 . 8/23/2018
Very interesting story, I like Maiko’s motivation and am curious to learn more about the specifics of her backstory!
ShugoYuuki123 chapter 6 . 6/24/2018
Feel sorry for the children with what they'll wake up to. Looking forward to the next update though
ShugoYuuki123 chapter 5 . 1/13/2018
Enjoying the story looking forward to the next chapter :)
laniDG11 chapter 4 . 4/19/2017
Nice!
Articephonix chapter 3 . 1/26/2017
I hope that you update this story soon as im dieing to know what happens next
Guest chapter 3 . 1/17/2017
So good, I can't wait for the next chapter
laniDG11 chapter 5 . 6/9/2016
It interesting:)
iJoeyMonster chapter 5 . 6/6/2016
I've always wondered what Deidara's last name is. I've seen people make it up or just use Iwa for it.
thatonegirlwhoyoudontknow chapter 5 . 4/18/2016
Great
Tala Is Shining chapter 6 . 2/5/2016
I luv Deidara also
Its a nice chappy

~TALA
wookiee.cookie chapter 5 . 12/21/2015
Awesome chapter! I'm so curious to see what this kekkei genkai is!
Tala Is Shining chapter 5 . 12/21/2015
Nice update, hoping fir a next one

~Tala
Tala Is Shining chapter 4 . 11/18/2015
Well Till now its good
Im no Naruto writer but I love Deidara, so im very critical to stories about him
I think till this chappy he is good continue plz

~Tala
wookiee.cookie chapter 4 . 11/13/2015
Another great chapter, love the stab she took at Sasori's speed lol!
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