Reviews for True Lightning |
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Hurlstien chapter 2 . 8/10/2019 Looking good so far! You're grammar and writing style are on point, it's a pleasure to read. Maiko seems like an interesting character, I'm looking forward to learning more about her background, and whether or not she knows Kisame (a fave of mine). Thank you for writing! |
treesofsilverleaves chapter 6 . 8/23/2018 Very interesting story, I like Maiko’s motivation and am curious to learn more about the specifics of her backstory! |
ShugoYuuki123 chapter 6 . 6/24/2018 Feel sorry for the children with what they'll wake up to. Looking forward to the next update though |
ShugoYuuki123 chapter 5 . 1/13/2018 Enjoying the story looking forward to the next chapter :) |
laniDG11 chapter 4 . 4/19/2017 Nice! |
Articephonix chapter 3 . 1/26/2017 I hope that you update this story soon as im dieing to know what happens next |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/17/2017 So good, I can't wait for the next chapter |
laniDG11 chapter 5 . 6/9/2016 It interesting:) |
iJoeyMonster chapter 5 . 6/6/2016 I've always wondered what Deidara's last name is. I've seen people make it up or just use Iwa for it. |
thatonegirlwhoyoudontknow chapter 5 . 4/18/2016 Great |
Tala Is Shining chapter 6 . 2/5/2016 I luv Deidara also Its a nice chappy ~TALA |
wookiee.cookie chapter 5 . 12/21/2015 Awesome chapter! I'm so curious to see what this kekkei genkai is! |
Tala Is Shining chapter 5 . 12/21/2015 Nice update, hoping fir a next one ~Tala |
Tala Is Shining chapter 4 . 11/18/2015 Well Till now its good Im no Naruto writer but I love Deidara, so im very critical to stories about him I think till this chappy he is good continue plz ~Tala |
wookiee.cookie chapter 4 . 11/13/2015 Another great chapter, love the stab she took at Sasori's speed lol! |