Reviews for A Vale between Worlds |
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![]() ![]() Have Jonathan’s Kent (aka Superboy) burn all the Grimm with his laser eyes before they can kill Superman. That would be awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow just wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that must've been a lot of typing. I hope Ruby and Yang will be back to their normal selves soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They all better come back later! DX |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best fight ever. I love rwby and dc so yea. |
![]() ![]() Ruby hurry up and get well and yang please be careful, I gotta say I was not expecting superman to lose, well this was a intense chapter. I love it. |
![]() ![]() Yay new chapter I'm so happy your continuing thank you. |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOD please I begging you do not stop this I LOVE IT ! Can't wait for the next chapter :D . |
![]() ![]() ![]() WAZUUUUUUP DeadPool just gotta say loved your movie it was one hell of a super hero movie wish human shiskebabs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, hope you update soon! Also, hi Deadpool! |
![]() ![]() Please continue it really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's best to be careful when using Deadpool. He's the kind of character who can ruin stories if one shoehorns and "abuses" him way too much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should make the paragraphs shorter, about five to six lines per paragraph at most. Long paragraphs make things harder to read. |
![]() ![]() YES! Thanks for updating! I love this! PLEASE, update again! I LOVE this! |