I really liked the conclusion to this story. It is the last chapter I'm assuming? It feels concluded, but if it's not, I'm always up for more chapters too.

I really loved the Oliver and Barry scene. It was interesting to see the Rogers reversed, and having him give Oliver Some advice. He was the voice of reason.

Love that Oliver and Felicity reunited, and they finally admitted how they felt about each other, with Felicity saying it back this time. I couldn't imagine a more fitting ending.

This chapter was good, but I noticed a few mistakes. You mentioned she was with Barry in this chapter, when in the previous chapter it served to be with Ray. I just found that part confusing other than that a really great chapter.

I loved the fact that they hashed out there feelings. I think that has been needed for awhile. They still have a long way to go, buy it was a step in the right direction. Hope they can resolve their issues soon. Really loving this story.

The dream I found very interesting. It was his subconscious's way of telling him she was going to move on with Ray. And the way you write it is so realistic to there characters. And Oliver's heart when he realized Felicity was moving on with Ray. I hope it's not too late, and he'll still have a chance to fix it.

Great setup in the second chapter to what I know is going to be a great story. I love how Felicity can express her feelings so freely, I think Oliver can learn a thing or two about that. He a lot of the time is detached from human emotion, and I think he can learn to express himself more. But what Felicity said to Oliver I believe he needed to hear.

I don't think she was upset about Oliver breaking his promise to her, but rather he was alive and didn't tell her about it. And if Felicity didn't seem at the foundry, who knows if he even would have.

But I hope she understands soon why Oliver did what he did. What he did was to protect her, his friends and his family. I think for right now it's best Oliver let Felicity go, he just wants her to be happy. I hope soon though, he'll realize he's the key to her happiness.

This is a great start. I think a fic like this was needed after the heartbreaking fall finale. Loved how you went into depth of how Oliver feels about felicity, and all the important people in Oliver's life after Ra's Ah Ghul delivered his final blow.

And I'm happy he lived, not that would not be a possibility, as there is no show without Oliver Queen. Glad that Maseo helped him, despite joining the league of assassins, it shows how much of a mentor he really was to Oliver.

And the slap was unexpected, and I'm sure Oliver will have a lot of explaining to do to Felicity. Who I'm sure thought he was dead, and her shock, and reaction was written very well. Because realistically I don't think she would just pretend nothing happened upon his return.

Is this the end? I'm gonna cry if its the end. This is too amazing! :')

Ready for them to get together. Can't wait for next chapter.

Feeeeels!

MY OLICITY FLUFF

Seriously, she would never a creep like Ray, you are as bad as the writers

uggghhh! nic you broke my heart. Please tell me that she's not inlove with Ray. Ray of all people. pleeeeeease dont let it happen.

aww Nicole...I've read your other works before. nothing had prepared me for this. This is amazing! Felicity slapping him was probably a way to deal with her emotions. she must have gone thru hell in the two months he was away. so I think it was shock reaction. thanks babe. can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope you're not gona kill me in the next chapter lol

Yes! The I love yous and kisses and make ups have come loved this chapter!

how cute ! I love it keep it going

Wow a lot of angst for our olicity in this chapter things are getting complicated !