| Reviews for The Path Less Chosen |
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TheGrandDisciple chapter 8 . 4/25/2017 Next chapter please |
TheLunaEffect chapter 1 . 12/12/2016 Hey peoples, This is a notice that this fic has been abandoned twice by it original owner and ive decided to save it from the abyss that is the forgotten half fics never finished, just left as unfinished worlds and missing the thing that we like best about them. Its going to to me a while to get them going as im giving them a bit of beta-ing and adding a bit more color to the words. If your interested I hope to see you in the reviews of my chapters soon! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2016 and this shows the problem with JK works harry a bitch. |
keitaropurple69 chapter 8 . 10/4/2016 I love this story and it is a very original story, but i was wondering if you were going to write anymore to this story or not? |
VioletBuckbeak chapter 8 . 6/28/2016 Wow, great story. Hope you continue it |
Alex chapter 1 . 1/22/2015 Dude that must have been one big fight! |
herart chapter 8 . 1/11/2015 How intense. How are they gonna re-build their closeness? Well, no matter. It seems that they've already started, isn't it? |
jslee102 chapter 8 . 1/9/2015 I love that there is another chapter to this story. I like that they are actually preparing for war. The lemon was good. |
bridgetlynn chapter 6 . 1/6/2015 Got to this point before I decided to cave for the human being's need of sleep - I have to say this is quite interesting so far. I also have to say I'd like to smack Harry upside the head - but then again, he's never exactly reacted to things he doesn't particularly like in the most emotionally healthy ways. He's never once looked at Hermione's situation from her perspective - she abandoned him...she cut him off...he wanted her to stay and she didn't...etc. etc. He didn't like that so now he's (irrationally) angry at her. Which is ironic considering part of her argument was that she was leaving to do things on her own merits. The fact that the boy who despised his fame couldn't (wouldn't) understand that is ironic. Could Hermione have chosen not to cut everyone off while she was in the USA? Sure. But considering Harry's initial reaction to her leave (ie: temper tantrum) I'm not quite sure I totally blame her for going cold turkey. The woman spent 7 years keeping him alive, obliviated her parents and sent them to another continent and play arm-chair psychologist for every emotional upheaval he had since he was 11...he should have been on bended knee proclaiming that he would do whatever he could to make sure what SHE wanted got done for once. Looking forward to seeing how this progresses...and hoping that Harry pulls his head out of his ass soon. |
sjking2 chapter 8 . 1/1/2015 Its great, really love it, whens the next one coming |
Zamolxis chapter 8 . 12/30/2014 Speechless |
Zamolxis chapter 7 . 12/30/2014 Amazing |
DarthNeBuL chapter 8 . 12/29/2014 Very nice story, can't wait for continuation..was a bit confused though by ninja fighting scenes, mixed with wizard duels. I think you should focus on pure magic fights, rather than adding that "ninja" element. Sex scene is ok, but still wanted to see romantic and kissing part taking more space than actually sex. I hope that you have some aces up your sleeve, cause it seems that all the most exciting moments have been already introduced to readers (Harry and Hermione reunion and love scene). New war (and villain) has to be really epic to keep readers interested. Hope you can handle that. P.S. Please don't kill Harry or Hermione _/\_ |
hhrforever chapter 8 . 12/28/2014 wow, wow, absolutely loved the sex scene. The idea of someone more powerful than the three of them combined it crazy. I can't wait to read more and if they are really together now. I really hope they are. Great part leading up to the sex scene too. Hope you have another update soon. |
Guest chapter 6 . 12/26/2014 c'mon dude use some imagination for wizarding duel don't do those ninja turtles mix you can always look the story harry potter and temporal becon i liked it because the author made good interpretation of hp world without losing its originality |